Why people do visit a museum?
Nowadays people sometimes arrange to visit museums to look at various pieces of artwork remaining from the past. Everyone has a particular goal in their mind, which encourages them to visit such places. Therefore, I am not able to discuss all the motives people have for their decision, but I will point out the most outstanding reasons from my point of view.
My first reason and maybe the most important one is that the fast pace of life today puts a lot of pressure and stress on people. They have to spend a long time at the workplace or in traffic to make a living, which leads to a variety of mental disorders. From my point of view, after a day of hard work, people actually need to relieve these pressures to restore their healthy lifestyle. One of the best ways to ease emotional pains is to visit popular places like museums. When people go to these places, they will get so much pleasure and relaxation since they no longer have to think about their responsibilities as an employee or a father, for instance. They are only supposed to enjoy themselves and look at amazing types of artifacts present there.
The second reason I want to give is that by turning around different parts of a museum, people learn a multitude of lessons from the past. They have the opportunity to see the negative consequences of lack of justice, freedom of speech, and equality in society. Many previous rulers could not save their authority because of not paying attention to human rights, and that's what modern-day governments should be cognizant of while learning about past kingdoms. In my opinion, it is a good idea to arrange tours for children to visit a museum and allow them to know about significant historical events, like the big revolutions in Europe during the past 5 centuries.
Lastly, this way people can learn more about the cultural and social aspects of the country they reside in. It not only gives them a lot of pleasure but also offers them a chance to become familiar with ancient cultures and traditions inherited from their ancestors. This will make them feel proud of their cultural achievements.
In summary, based on the aforementioned arguments, there are a myriad of reasons that persuade people to visit museums. Some of them, such as great opportunities to relax, learning historical lessons from the past, and become familiar with cultural and traditional achievements, are mentioned above. However, that was like a story in a nutshell. Actually, there are some other reasons and examples challenging our arguments, which are not mentioned above. All in all, I firmly believe that going to museums has a positive influence on our attitudes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, lastly, look, may, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in summary, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85745614035 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68060957721 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554824561404 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3477043264 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.476190476 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164676199913 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509712939222 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628748697462 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100583895874 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524785304296 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.