why people remember their gifts?

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why people remember their gifts?

There are many reasons for why people remember their gifts take different people.

Gifts are special kind of materials. These are sometimes flowers, toys, money, computer, house or anything. Gifts are not always material, these are maybe kiss, important words , sentences. Some type of smiling are be gifts for upset people.

Gifts used in different times and situations. Some of these gifts are given to workers in companies anniversaries, companies gives awards to experienced people for long years working. Some school do competition for students good skill, then succeeded of students received gifts. Some people give each other to gifts especially flowers on Valentines Day on 14 th February for love. Birthdays are much special than some of the gifts times, people receive any kind of gifts from their friends.
In conclusion, all of gifts influence people who received. If people most emotional they are remembered most, and effected a lot.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 43.0788530466 14% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 52.1666666667 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 1977.66487455 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 151.0 407.700716846 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33774834437 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 4.48103885553 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60545420618 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 212.727598566 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668874172185 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 618.680645161 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9199003102 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.1666666667 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5833333333 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435517926842 0.236089414692 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156118596113 0.076458572812 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139772401069 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296028530859 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153554955106 0.0645574589148 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.8 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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