Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
When it comes to the issue that the workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of task to do during workday than when they do similar task all day long, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinion. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that the workers are more satisfied when they have many types of task to do during their workday because there are so many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some points reading my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the life today developed rapidly. If the person does many tasks to do du in his work, he will get a chance to learn many different things. Eventually, he will be more successful in his life. However, the person will waste his time, if he improves himself in one thing only.
Another point why I advocate that is better for the worker to do many tasks during their work is to make their day more interesting. If the person repeats same task many times during a day, he will get board from his work and loss his concentration. Eventually, he may make many mistakes. On the other hand, doing many tasks mean learning many new things which add the joy to the employee day and improve his performance.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the rapid development in the technology today has a great impact on the employee’s tasks. The technology today makes many field related to each other. So, the employee should have the ability to solve and fix many problems. Moreover, the development in the technology require wide knowledge and that in turn force the employee to be more flexible with different type of tasks to add positive impact to his team.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion which says, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...rkers are more satisfied when they have many different types of task to do during workday than...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...his work, he will get a chance to learn many different things. Eventually, he will be more suc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69333333333 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4872095922 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4778898177 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.529411765 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399318925266 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126070627852 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173993809466 0.0737576698707 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189440098025 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1805342515 0.0645574589148 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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