Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The quaility of tasks ,which the workers have to do, is an important part of every job. Workers deal with their tasks in long run time; So it is noticeable that the quality of their tasks should affects on them. Some people blieves that workers prefer to have different kinds of tasks to do in their job. Others disagree. In my view, I do agree that workers should have different kinds of tasks for two important reasons.
First, workers do not be tired in compared to doing a monotoune work. If we have a unique taks, we defiently be tired of doing the task. For example, I remember when I worked in a wood compony, the manager forced me to do only a single task. I had to carry the large piece of woods to the ouside of company during my workdays. I asked him to change my tasks but he did not care me. I was really tired for doing this monotune work and my work efficency declined dramaticaly. One day, when I was carring the woods to the outside, my fingers completly got injuried in the bottom of woods and I went to the hospital. I missed three months because of doing a monotune work. As you can see, doing similar taks all day long, can be very dangerous.
Second, by doing different tasks, workes gather different kind of abilities and knowledges. If we do different tasks, we should be expert in diffrent works; so, we can use this variety of abilities to our future works. For instance, I remember when I worked in an enviromental company, the manager of that company forced me that I should cahnge my tasks evreyday. At first, it was terrible for me and I really frustrated because I was not able to all taks. After six months, I was an sophisticated expert worker who had diffrent job offer from similar companies because I gathers different abilities. As you can see, doing different tasks are completly preferable for the workers.
To sum up, the managers of the companies should consider this issue that workers prefer to have different types of tasks in compared to do only one task all day long.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
The quaility of tasks ,which the workers have to do, is an impo...
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Line 2, column 382, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...change my tasks but he did not care me. I was really tired for doing this monotun...
^
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...le to all taks. After six months, I was an sophisticated expert worker who had dif...
^^
Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'gather'
Suggestion: gather
... offer from similar companies because I gathers different abilities. As you can see, do...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, for example, for instance, kind of, in my view, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48641304348 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47901012463 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475543478261 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.875157978 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.55 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318164003365 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109993202022 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696168524053 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231845325125 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473994976356 0.0645574589148 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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