Workers would be more satisfied if they have various kinds of work to do during workday instead of doing the same job all day long.
When being asked when workers would be more satisfied, the response must be a boilerplate answer, to have various kind of work to prctice during workdays. In m view, it demonstrates workers expect their job provide them with a wide variety of benefits beyond salaries. I would give several reasons to substantiate my statement.
First of all, workers look for ocupations which provide a sense of achievement, and having different challenges on workdays makes such feeling possible. Take my father's experience as an instance. As a formal employee in a scientific lab, he always need to conduct a multitude of challenging experiments given by his boss. Although the process is so difficult that he always has to sacrifice his holidays. However, he still feel extremely joyful when witnessing his report makes big profits to his company. On the contrary, if he just check the same kind of specimens day after day, he may feel nothing but only empty everytime he goes to work. Therefore, a job with fertile experiences make sure employees' sense of accomplishment.
Secondly, workers place emphasis on promotion, and it is impossible for them to display their own competence if they doing the same job all day long. To illustrate such argument, my cousin's experience can be cited as an example. When working in a factory, the only thing she had to was checking whether all the datas are processed well or not. Even though she was eager to be raised to higher position, she was subjected to the requirement of her own position and cannot perform other excellent abilities. Eventually, she left the factory because she could not have an opportunity to access to a more successful life. Thus, it is evident that doing the same job lead to the limitation of promotion, and thus depressing workers.
Last but not least, workers care about their own health, and practicing the same things day by day degrades their physical health. Take my mother for example. Being a worker in a toy factory, she has to tolerate the noise of machines day after day which making her suffer from headache and also feeling uncomfortable. On the contrary, if the employer could give her differnent mission each day in different places, then such serious condition may be avoided. As a result, having various types of jobs results in workers' healthy body.
To conclude, even though some sophisticated people consider it is wise for workers to choose a seemingly easy job which only required them doing same things during workdays. I ponder workers will be more satisfied if they have various mission during workdays with respect to a sense of accomplishment, promotion and health.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 90
- your job has a greater effect to your overall happiness than yoursocial life does. 81
- TPO34 90
- TPO30 70
- Workers would be more satisfied if they have various kinds of work to do during workday instead of doing the same job all day long. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...llenging experiments given by his boss. Although the process is so difficult that he alw...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...crifice his holidays. However, he still feel extremely joyful when witnessing his re...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'things'' or 'thing's'?
Suggestion: things'; thing's
...eir own health, and practicing the same things day by day degrades their physical heal...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, kind of, as a result, first of all, on the contrary, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00225225225 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80049341572 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551801801802 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3015100938 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5652173913 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3043478261 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17391304348 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396166754845 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920031736315 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913976586011 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219867857568 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789411291662 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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