working three days or five days which is more enjoyable to the employees
Working three days has many advantages over working five days. Many people think that the five days is the most beneficial, people believe that five days would have the merit of being more knowledgeable. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that working three days enumerate many advantages. The basis of my opinion is financial, social, and personal.
From the financial perspective, the three days working is the best as it provide the employees the opportunity to save more money. Employees who are going to work every day, they using the public transportation such as buses, subway, or taxi, other people may use their cars, working three days rather than five days are the best way to save the amount of gas consumed by driving cars. The other option of saving is also by using the public transportation only three times weekly and then save the extra money for other entertainment purpose. Three days working is financially more beneficial.
Socially, working three days every week escalates the social net work among people.
When people would have the opportunity to work only three days every week, they will have other four days in the week extra through them they can enjoy their life. For instance they will have the chance to play sport or spend time with their children. The extra four days are a good promotion to go for a vacation or even a trip with our friend and relatives. Employees can easily communicate and improve their social net work among their friends. Employees are free form stress and the burden of work during those extra four days. Working three days is the best way to enjoy our family and enhance our relations.
Personally, working three days is the perfect schedule for me. I am a mom I have three boys they are over active and they need a lot of attentions. Working only three days a week will provides the chance to take care of my kids and pass on some values to them. Staying with my kids four days a week is much way better than putting them in a child care or having a baby sitter take caring of them. The three days schedule is the best for all moms.
In conclusion, for the reasons I mention above, I encourage all the employees to work three days every week. Financially they will save money to enjoy their life, socially employees will be able to enjoy family and friends, finally for moms it is the best to take care of your children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72157772622 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38984524526 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436194895592 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4583503663 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4782608696 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7391304348 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04347826087 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507781725282 0.236089414692 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191336816155 0.076458572812 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13621321224 0.0737576698707 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307538481136 0.150856017488 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672876183789 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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