Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building?
Modernist architecture began to change the idea of what a house could be at the beginning of the 1920s. Therefore has dominated the world of architecture and traditional dwellings. When looking for the perfect home, one has to decide on both buying a traditional house charmed with history, and maybe spider webs or a modern property and enjoying the technology. If I had to decide, I would prefer living in a modern apartment because of 3 reasons for maintenance, building materials, and floor planning.
Newly built homes will need almost zero renovation works to be done. Essentials like plumbing, heating and ventilation equipment or air-conditioning in a new apartment are high-tech and do not need extra cost for fixing or maintenance. These equipment are manufactured and provided by standard guidelines provided by experts in international organizations like LEED thus they are durable and long-lasting and one major benefit is their guarantee provided by their manufacturing companies. For example, my family and I were living in a traditional house and every now and then we had to fix the plumbing or the lightings and electronic equipment. Besides the heating technology used when building our house was not comparable to the new high-tech and efficient equipment used nowadays. If we had chosen to fix or renovate the equipment it would have been costly.
In addition, floor plans in modern-day buildings are different from traditional houses. A traditional house would give us more rooms on each floor and more areas in every room. Living in a standard room with minimum space needed in a modern-day apartment may seem at first counter-intuitive, but we have to keep in mind that we are living in the era of climate change and global warming which requires the need for zero energy and optimized architecture. For example, the total area of exterior walls is relevant to the energy-wasting through the walls, therefore the more the total area of the exterior walls, the more energy is wasted and the more heating and cooling equipment need to compensate.
- Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? 70
- Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer - items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice. 76
- If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...could be at the beginning of the 1920s. Therefore has dominated the world of architecture...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this equipment' or 'These equipments'?
Suggestion: This equipment; These equipments
...d extra cost for fixing or maintenance. These equipment are manufactured and provided by standa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
... were living in a traditional house and every now and then we had to fix the plumbing or the light...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12389380531 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07131922816 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533923303835 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8165668159 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.071428571 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290126584762 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981512553101 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912119653187 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210336636553 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898925475282 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.