Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
It is not trivial to think that people irrespective of their age, in general, enjoy life to the fullest. Although, there are other factors that they care about but the former belief overweighs the later. Personally, I believe that older people enjoy their life to a great extent as compared to teenagers and young people. I feel this way for two reasons which I will be exploring in the following essay.
First of all, young people have a lot of energy to achieve their goals but not enough time. Conversely, for older people, time is not an issue and neither is money. Generally, teenagers are involved in academic activities and have deadlines to complete their projects and assignments. However, the aged and retired people do not have to worry about these constraints. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Around five years ago, when I was a sophomore at my University, I had six subjects every semester and I must admit that it would take all of my time, even my leisure time. I was extremely busy finishing the college assignments and projects before the deadlines and reconciling them to the professors’ requirements. For this reason, I had to even retract playing my favorite sport badminton and the competition among my mates was my primary concern. As a result, I managed to secure good grades but failed to enjoy my life. I had thought of utilizing my college period visiting a new historic place every semester with my friends, but it only remained a dream forever.
Secondly, youngsters are more focused on earning money, unlike the old people who have been saving money their entire life only to spend later. Furthermore, older people receive pension from their organization and therefore they can indulge in activities they only thought of as a child. For example, my uncle is a retired army general and earns enough even after retirement. He has joined a dance academy because he always wanted to learn classical folk dance. Apart from that, he spends most of his time traveling abroad with aunt, fulfilling his desire to visit every corner of the world. Additionally, during his leisure time, he loves reading novels a lot and every weekend calls me to give a brief summary of the novel he read for the week. This example clearly illustrates that old people have a habit of satisfying their so-called "incomplete desires" because they have time and money which immensely matters.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that aged people enjoy their life more when juxtaposed with the youngsters. This is because they have prodigious time and also because they are not concerned with making money at their age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in general, as a result, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92222222222 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7045905192 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8477613443 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3043478261 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5652173913 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.39130434783 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225757284627 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074597078218 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103714348894 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16382235092 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069552836987 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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