because modern life is very complex it is essential to have the ability to plan and organize
Despite all the benefits modern life has brought about to our lives, it makes some situation so complex that to achieve goals, one needs to have the ability to plan and organize his way. I cling to this standpoint for two main reasons, which I will elucidate in the following essay.
To begin with, people nowdays are facing an anormouse body of information most of which may make them deviate from their own predefined way. To shed more light on the issue, in the past individuals only live their own lives, and regarding to their inner voice led their lives, which acually was very helpful. people nowadays, in contrast, have had access to a diverse array of information offerd by modern lives that may dim their inner voice, and choose their ways based on some wrong information. Thus, if one has a predefined plan and be loyal to it, he will be less likely to sheer from his way.
Second, during the process of human beings evolutionary, most aspects of human life including social relationships, the way of subsistence, and to name but a few has undergone a lot of changes. Hence, one needs to have the ability to adapt his plan to the complexity of modern life so that he could better achieve his goals; otherwise would be eliminated by the competitors in any given realm. For a tangible example, consider a manager owning a tissue company. If the manager was not skillful in planning and organizing his systems, he would induce this irregularity to the employees. They will not take serious the system's goal and lose their passion for being innovative. This will, in turn, leads to weak products devoid of any creativity and potential to grab the market. As a result, the business will soon fail.
To put all in a nutshell, considering all the aforementioned points, I firmly believe that people should attain the ability of efficient planning and organizing. I believe so because not only does it help them to be loyal to their goals and not distracted by other information, but it also helps them shine on the stage instead of being removed by other competitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, regarding, second, so, thus, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 30.3222958057 188% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 370.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70540540541 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6197053459 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 145.348785872 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543243243243 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 419.366225166 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2219570974 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.066666667 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199945442288 0.272083759551 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056858234135 0.0996497079465 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768525076205 0.0662205650399 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122475200596 0.162205337803 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576692642588 0.0443174109184 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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