Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important for governments to protect wild animals and wilderness areas for the future generations.
Firstly, today, human behaviors such as farming, cutting the tree and manufacturing are out of control of government. wilderness areas are destroyed due to behaviors of human. government is high authority and they have a power to control behaviors of human which have effect on environment, Government is create a same laws and policy to control a behaviors. As we all know so many people hunt animal and eat animal such as cow, bear. Government have to pass same policy and laws to punish the people who hunt the animal and also damage to the wilderness areas. For an example a few year ago most of people damage a wilderness areas and hunt to the animal but now a days people don’t do this because government passed laws and punish those people who broken a government lows.
Furthermore, government to do balancing economical system. Government have money so they invest to a truism places in wilderness area. Truism places is attractions to a people of truest. If truest spend money then it’s help to a government. Its help to a researcher and development for a student and also for a future generations. For an Example, in India county government spend money to invest a museum then government save money and it’s help for future generations.
Moreover, government a protect a wild animals like create zoo and save animal for future generations. Now a day dinosaur are not exists in earth so human and government are protect a wild animal and it help for a study in future generations. For an example Government have create a organizations and involve a people to protect a wild animal for future generations.
In a nutshell, government have a passed a laws for damage wilderness areas and hunt animal, balancing economical system to use of wilderness areas, government have methods to protect animal. Governments to protect the wilderness areas for the future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wilderness
...uring are out of control of government. wilderness areas are destroyed due to behaviors of...
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Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Government
...re destroyed due to behaviors of human. government is high authority and they have a power...
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Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...ve effect on environment, Government is create a same laws and policy to control a beh...
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Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a behavior' or simply 'behaviors'?
Suggestion: a behavior; behaviors
...reate a same laws and policy to control a behaviors. As we all know so many people hunt ani...
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Line 2, column 447, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...at animal such as cow, bear. Government have to pass same policy and laws to punish ...
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Line 2, column 593, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ss areas. For an example a few year ago most of people damage a wilderness areas and hunt to t...
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Line 2, column 661, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...erness areas and hunt to the animal but now a days people don't do this because gover...
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Line 2, column 723, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...apos;t do this because government passed laws and punish those people who broken ...
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Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...Furthermore, government to do balancing economical system. Government have money so they i...
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Line 4, column 324, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'generation'?
Suggestion: generation
...ent for a student and also for a future generations. For an Example, in India county govern...
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Line 6, column 22, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...re generations. Moreover, government a protect a wild animals like create zoo and save...
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Line 6, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w a day dinosaur are not exists in earth so human and government are protect a w...
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Line 6, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...day dinosaur are not exists in earth so human and government are protect a wild ...
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Line 6, column 176, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'protected'.
Suggestion: protected
... in earth so human and government are protect a wild animal and it help for a study i...
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Line 6, column 205, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...rnment are protect a wild animal and it help for a study in future generations. For ...
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Line 6, column 276, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...rations. For an example Government have create a organizations and involve a people to...
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Line 6, column 283, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... For an example Government have create a organizations and involve a people to p...
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Line 8, column 41, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a law' or simply 'laws'?
Suggestion: a law; laws
...In a nutshell, government have a passed a laws for damage wilderness areas and hunt an...
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Line 8, column 103, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...erness areas and hunt animal, balancing economical system to use of wilderness areas, gove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 7.30242825607 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.01324503311 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 318.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99685534591 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95356686345 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.399371069182 0.540411800872 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9388553469 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4705882353 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 4.19205298013 453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410848020654 0.272083759551 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17499833186 0.0996497079465 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150395504167 0.0662205650399 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303826925593 0.162205337803 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106426881399 0.0443174109184 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.42419426049 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.