It is more important to work at job that you enjoy, even if the salary is low, than it is to have a high-paying job that you do not enjoy.Which do you prefer and why.
Learning are never end until people are live in the world. Learning are good quality of people who always learn same thing new. There is no matter where and when learn. Knowledge is one of the most important to survive in this era. Some people think that people can learn most important lessons in school because they mate a different people that why they learn so many thing, teach new things and also they learn a life lesson. However, in my point of view people learn most important things outside of school rather than inside of school.
To begin with, everyone can learn many things from society and community. People can learn from so many people who live in community. They learn how to communicate with other and how to behave with other people. In school they learn also communications skill but they implement in real life in front of society so they can expand a knowledge and also they gain knowledge with other. For example I was in school that time I communicate in front of my classmate and I never talk with other people. When I started too involved in community then I improve my communications skills and increase my knowledge.
Furthermore, only educations knowledge are not required. People need to aware of outside information’s so that people can learn other country’s culture and living style. People can read a newspaper so they can learn so many information. In school people can learn history of country they not aware of what’s going on today. For instance, my brother was in school he has knowledge about history of country. When he started reading newspaper then they know about real situations in the world.
To sum up, learn inside school is important but outside is very important because of learn in real life situations and people can learn more in society so I believe that knowledge is outside of school is more important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'ended'.
Suggestion: ended
Learning are never end until people are live in the world. Lea...
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Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... people are live in the world. Learning are good quality of people who always learn...
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Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...different people that why they learn so many thing, teach new things and also they learn a...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'educations'' or 'education's'?
Suggestion: educations'; education's
...ease my knowledge. Furthermore, only educations knowledge are not required. People need...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...n read a newspaper so they can learn so many information. In school people can learn...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...n read a newspaper so they can learn so many information. In school people can learn history of ...
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Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...has knowledge about history of country. When he started reading newspaper then they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 323.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82972136223 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6163939966 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427244582043 0.540411800872 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8565492642 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1052631579 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06452816374 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0197368962348 0.272083759551 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00774356864674 0.0996497079465 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0168207382837 0.0662205650399 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0206885120653 0.162205337803 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237350804392 0.0443174109184 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 8.42419426049 76% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 63.6247240618 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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