The article states that , many employees in United states are inclined to work four days a week with four-fifths of their normal pay instead of five-day workweek. Moreover , due to the reading , by this approach the economy would benefit as well as individual companies and employees. However , the professor believes just opposite of that and explains that it won't have any benefits neither for economy nor for companies and workers.
First the reading claims that , by shortening work days employees would feel more rested and they would make fewer errors in their work so the company would increase it's profits and since four-day employees would be paid 80 percent of the normal rate , it can hire more staff. The professor refuses this point by saying that , conversly companies would need to spand more money by adding new workers. He adds , hiring more staff would raise companies expenses on training new employees and their medical costs and also more space and computers would be needed for the new staff.
Second the article posits that , country as awhole would benefit of offering this option cause it can decrease unemployment rates. However the professor says that , this avenue would raise expectation and workers will be expected to do the same amount of work which was being done in 5 days once so it will cause the work to be more unpleasant.
Third the passage claims that , employees would improve the quality of their lives by allocating more free times to their families and having more time fore their personal interests. The professor opposes this point by explaining that , there are some risks related to this approach. He believes that reducing work days to four will reduce the quality of workers life. There will be low chances of advances and getting promote in jobs and four-day workweek employees would be more likely to lose their job in an economic downturn.
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- Offering employees the option of a four day workweek won 039 t affect the company profits economic conditions or the lives of employees in the ways the reading suggests 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 5.04856512141 376% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 316.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96835443038 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3988381458 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528481012658 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1522681441 49.2860985944 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.833333333 110.228320801 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 21.698381199 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196958784934 0.272083759551 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767467418363 0.0996497079465 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059665127046 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124735314784 0.162205337803 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473537747272 0.0443174109184 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.3589403974 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.