In recent years, there has been a dramatic increase in the availability of organic foods. Organic' foods are regulated by the government; thus in order to officially be termed "organic", they must be grown without pesticides or artificial fertilizers. In just a short time, it has become overwhelmingly clear that consuming only organic fruits and vegetables has a number of benefits.
First, organic foods have been shown to have a positive impact on human health. Most foods are grown using many chemicals, some of which eventually end up being consumed by people. Research has proven that eating chemical additives harms humans over time. For example, a recent study linked the consumption of artificial additives found in non-organic foods to behavioral disorders in children. However, since organic foods are grown without pesticides, people do not have to worry about unexpected side effects from eating chemicals.
Next, organic foods also benefit the environment. Traditional farming techniques dump hundreds of pesticides into the ground every year. Additionally, chemicals used in farming remain in the ground for many years afterwards. Organic foods, on the other hand, do not use any harmful pesticides or fertilizers. As a result, there are fewer pollutants entering the Earth's land and water systems.
Finally, the consumption of organic foods also benefits small farmers. Most of the world's food supply is produced and sold by large corporations. This makes it very difficult for small farmers to compete. However, the majority of organic foods are grown on family farms. Buying more organic food means that small farmers are able to make a living off of farming.
The lecture states that organic foods such as organic fruits and vegetables have several benefits for people, and it provides three reasons of support. However, the professor challenges all these reasons and asserts that though organic foods have become popular, there is a misconception about them. Then, he rejects all the author’s reasons.
First, the reading material avers that organic foods, which don’t include pesticide or chemical fertilizers, have a wonderful effect on human health. It says an example of research about effects of non-organic food on behavioral disorders in children. Conversely, the professor believes that farmers use bio-pesticide such as rotenent instead of chemical pesticide. He posits that this plant-derivative pesticide has unpleasant effects as much as chemical pesticides. As an example, it cause a pancratic disease in human. Then, it is only a miss-information about the organic food which they do not have side effects.
Second, the author mentions that organic food benefits environment because farmers do not add chemical materials like a pesticide or chemical fertilizers into ground when they are producing them. Nonetheless, the lecturer opposes this idea by explaining that farms where they are used to producing organic food have lower yields at least 20 percent. Therefore, to produce the same amount of food, farmers need more land. The more land they need, the more forest should be clear cut. He absolutely disagrees that the harm of chemical fertilizers are more than forests clear cut.
Third, the lecture points out that buying organic food is a supporting practice to help family farmers, since only the small farms are producing those organic fruits and vegetables. Controversially, the professor says that since those organic foods have become popular, big corporations are producing these kinds. He refers the students to look at the organic labels on the foods next time they go shopping. In overall the professor asserts that the organic food practice does not have each of the benefits which the author mentions.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
... chemical pesticides. As an example, it cause a pancratic disease in human. Then, it ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, however, look, nonetheless, second, so, then, therefore, third, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1373.03311258 128% => OK
No of words: 326.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38957055215 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80342087099 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539877300613 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 419.366225166 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9737204674 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6111111111 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291929701571 0.272083759551 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982019609462 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599137591133 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190098062878 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298393384087 0.0443174109184 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
... chemical pesticides. As an example, it cause a pancratic disease in human. Then, it ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, however, look, nonetheless, second, so, then, therefore, third, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1373.03311258 128% => OK
No of words: 326.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38957055215 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80342087099 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539877300613 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 419.366225166 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9737204674 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6111111111 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291929701571 0.272083759551 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982019609462 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599137591133 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190098062878 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298393384087 0.0443174109184 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.