Robert E. Peary was a well-known adventurer and arctic explorer who in 1909 set out
to reach the North Pole. When he returned from the expedition, he claimed to have
reached the pole on April 7, 1909. This report made him into an international celebrity.
Though some historians have expressed doubts that Peary did in fact reach the North
Pole, three arguments provide strong support for the truth of Peary's claim.
Robert E. Peary, a well-known explorer, claimed to have reached the North Pole in a 1909 expedition. A passage thinks that he did indeed came across the place because of a committee’s declaration, the short time Tom Avery used to complete the same journey, and measurements of the shadow . A lecture, however, deems these ideas to be unconvincing.
To begin with, the committee’s declaration that Peary did in fact reach the place doesn’t prove anything. Though it is true that they concluded accounts to be consistent and persuasive, the committee, made up of a lot of Peary’s friends, wasn’t very objective. Plus, the investigation lasted only for two days, meaning that the committee didn’t examine his records accurately. Therefore, the committee’s declaration couldn’t prove that Peary reached the North Pole.
Furthermore, the short time Avery used to complete the same journey couldn’t show that Peary reached the North Pole. Although Avery used the same sled, dog breed, and number of dogs, the lecture states that the two expeditions are actually very different. For instance, Avery carried much less weight because he dropped all his food along the way by airplane, and he was faced with more favorable conditions compared with Peary. Thus, the short time Avery used has no link with Peary reaching the North Pole.
Lastly, the measurements of the shadow aren’t evidence that Peary reached the North Pole. Despite that the photographed sun’s position corresponds with the one on the North Pole that day, the photographs, appearing fuzzy, were taken using old equipment a long time ago. They are also blurred and unclear through old age. Hence, this has nothing to do with Peary reaching the North Pole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in fact, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 280.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21071428571 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77794424034 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578571428571 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4455192611 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2666666667 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06452816374 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271320283924 0.272083759551 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103415413669 0.0996497079465 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094485679135 0.0662205650399 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166738810728 0.162205337803 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305625956713 0.0443174109184 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.