The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake. The level of salt in the lake’s water—what scientists call its salinity—has been increasing steadily for years because the lake’s water is evaporating faster than it is being replaced by rainfall or rivers. If the trend continues, the lake’s water will soon become so salty that the lake will be unable to support fish and bird populations. The lake would then become essentially a dead zone. Fortunately, there are several ways to reverse the trend that is threatening the lake’s health.
One option is direct removal of salt from the lake’s water in special desalination facilities. Water from the lake would be pumped into the facilities and heated. This would cause the water to evaporate into steam, while salt and other materials dissolved in the water would be left behind. The steam would then be cooled down and returned to the lake as salt-free water. Gradually, the high salt levels would be reduced and the lake’s overall health would be restored.
Another possible solution is to dilute the salt level in the lake with water from the ocean. Since water in the Pacific Ocean is 20 percent less salty than water in the lake, bringing ocean water into the lake would decrease the lake’s salinity. The ocean water could be delivered through pipelines or canals.
Yet another solution would be to control the lake’s salinity by constructing walls to divide the lake into several sections. In the smaller sections, salinity would be allowed to increase. However, in the main and largest section, salinity would be reduced and controlled by, among other things, directing all the freshwater from small rivers in the area to flow into that main section of the lake.
The article offered three seemingly possible solutions to cope with the inland lake's salinity in California. However, the lecture cast doubts on it.
First, the article proposed that through using pump to remove the water, extract the salt, and bring salt-free water back to the lake could be a practical solution. Nevertheless, the lecturer pointed that the material within the salt may including toxic chemicals that could evaporate into the air and cause people's health problems.
Secondly, the article mentioned to dilute water through pouring ocean water into the lake. However, the ocean is far from the place where the lake located, the local government may not have enough funding for building canals or pipelines. Thus the lecture sees the solution as not practical.
Lastly, by separating the lake into different sections may be realistic. While the lecturer claimed that there has earth quakes that may destroy the artificial walls, the dividing section solution may lead to a total failure. In sum, the lecture denoted all the reasons why the article's solutions may not solve the salinity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 22.412803532 4% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 1373.03311258 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 270.72406181 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05806451613 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.04702891845 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32584000692 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690322580645 0.540411800872 128% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 419.366225166 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7587087627 49.2860985944 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06452816374 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229989621225 0.272083759551 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984459091832 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726536021621 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229989621225 0.162205337803 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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