T P O 53 Integrated Writing Tasks
The main idea of both the passage and the talk is about imposing high taxes on cigarettes and other unhealthy products. In the text, the author provides three social benefits of the mentioned policy. The lecturer challenges all the viable benefits and believes that none of these arguments is far-reaching.
Firstly, the author mentions that imposing high taxes on cigarettes and unhealthy products, people will discourage to buy and use these products. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that high taxes will not lead to healthy lifestyle. She further explains that large number of people will encourage to buy cheaper products that they have more detrimental effects on humans' health. Besides, if individuals buy expensive unhealthy products , they will spend less money on healthy products.
Moreover, the author asserts that it is fair to some of the financial burden like medial costs is shifted from all of society to just those who choose to participate in the unhealthy activities. The lecture, on the contrary, points out that this is not fair issue which a bunch of people have been responsible to financial burdens because it is very hard and challenging for many people who have a small income to pay extra taxes.
Eventually, the reading passage holds the opinion that extra taxes on cigarettes significantly boost revenue for the government that can be used for medical assistance or public welfare projects. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that this policy is not effective, and it has numerous drawbacks since the governments spend million dollars on irrelevant issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of these arguments is far-reaching. Firstly, the author mentions that imposi...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
...t large number of people will encourage to buy cheaper products that they have more de...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...t they have more detrimental effects on humans health. Besides, if individuals buy exp...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...viduals buy expensive unhealthy products , they will spend less money on healthy p...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pend less money on healthy products. Moreover, the author asserts that it is ...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
..., the author asserts that it is fair to some of the financial burden like medial costs is s...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have a small income to pay extra taxes. Eventually, the reading passage ho...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rer, on the other hand, posits that this policy is not effective, and it has nume...
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Line 7, column 337, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...s drawbacks since the governments spend million dollars on irrelevant issues.
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Line 7, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d million dollars on irrelevant issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, conversely, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 259.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22007722008 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69461439645 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9513551675 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.909090909 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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