TPO 1
Employees want to reduce time working from five days to four days a week, and in this way, companies give them four-fifth of their normal salary, as the reading puts it. It provides three reasons of support. The lecturer, nevertheless, repudiates all reasons and explains is not beneficial.
The first, the reading states that a company can benefit from this policy in that not only does it have to pay less money to their employees, but also the rate of error of them is reduced. The professor repudiates this reason by saying that companies have to pay more money in order to train and medical insurances of new employees. That companies have to provide new offices and computers cut down the profit of them.
The second, the passage posits that the rate of unemployment would decrease because of hiring new staffs. Quite on the contrary, the professor has cast serious doubt on this belief by saying that no new job can be found, if companies a new suggestion to do remained tasks. He says that in this way, the current job would be an unpleasant job.
The third, the reading claims that it is tremendously helpful for employees since they can spend more time with their families. The professor emphasizes that if they work less time, it may cause lose their chance to promote in their job. In some cases, when facing predicament economic, they would lose their work.
- A/D: people care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition still make people work harder. 40
- young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities 78
- TPO 1 85
- A/D: Technology desinged to make our life simply actually makes our life complicated. 80
- TPO 54 3
Comments
if companies submit a new
if companies submit a new suggestion to do remained tasks.
if companies a new suggestion to do remained tasks
Description: what is the verb for this sentence? can you re-write this sentence?
it may cause lose their chance
it may lose their chance
flaws:
It is 'first, second, third' not 'The first, The second, The third'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 239 250
No. of Characters: 1102 1200
No. of Different Words: 134 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.932 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.611 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.402 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.939 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.337 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.602 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.132 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4