The reading and the lecture are about salvage logging,which is one way of dealing with aftermath of these disasters.The aouthor of the reading belives that this process is benefitical for habitat and economy.The lecturer cast doubt on the claims made in the article.He thinks that these observations are not reflective.
First of all,the author claims that salvage logging ensure immediately fresh growth.She believes that thanks to salvage logging we can cope with some disaster such as forest fires and severe storms.This point is challenged by the lecturer.She says that decomposing of ineffective threes is not necessary.Furthermore,she points out that growing immediately depends on nutrion rate into soil.She thinks soil quality is more important for growing.
Secondly,the author states that decaying of threes cause to occur insects and it is very harmful for threes.He argues that insects such as bark beetle is very danger for the other threes that still live.The lecturer rebuts this argument.She suggest that not all kinds of insects are harmful for threes.She elaborates on this by mentioning that birds and insects have crucial role over threes for long term sustainability.
Finally,the author mentions that salvage logging has advantage over economy.He is of the opinion that salvege logging create more employment than traditional logging operations.İt helps to occur new job area.The lecturer,on the other hand,states that its economic advantages are very small and limited.She puts forth the idea that salvage logging cost is very expensive.For example they shold use helicopter for this operation and it is very expensive.
Conclusion,the lecturer effectively cast doubt on all of claims and theories presented in the reading passage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, second, secondly, so, still, as for, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 266.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64661654135 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16733283481 2.5805825403 123% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582706766917 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 53.0 21.2450331126 249% => Sentence length is too long
Sentence length SD: 128.876064496 49.2860985944 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 300.4 110.228320801 273% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.2 21.698381199 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.8 7.06452816374 351% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 4.19205298013 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266549470471 0.272083759551 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132749780879 0.0996497079465 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720772841808 0.0662205650399 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132749780879 0.162205337803 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720772841808 0.0443174109184 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.8 13.3589403974 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 53.8541721854 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 5.55761589404 263% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.0289183223 228% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.38 12.2367328918 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.42419426049 128% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.7273730684 275% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.498013245 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.2008830022 268% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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