TPO 24- Integrated
The main idea of both the passage and the talk is about the fossil of Tyrannosaurus rex (T.rex). In the text, the author claims that researchers have found a lot of information about the animals tissues. The lecturer challenges all the evidence mentioned in the reading and believes that none of these arguments is correct.
Firstly, the author states that small branching channels inside the leg bone are associated with blood vessels. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that soft substances inside the bone's of T.rex is not like a blood vessel and it might be a trace of moist residue of bacteria colony.
Moreover, the author asserts that microscopic examination of the various parts of the inner bone revealed the presence of spheres that could be the remains of red blood cells. The lecturer, on the contrary, points out that spheres could be have a different origin because these spheres had not been found in other primitive animals. Besides, the color of the spheres might could be cause of reddish materials.
Eventually, the reading passage holds the opinion that the dinosaur leg bone have collagen which is the main component of living bone tissue. The lecturer, on the other hand, says that collagen never have been found older than 100 million years. Therefore, other sources could be responsible for the revealed collagen. She Further explains that collagen could be remained on these bones after handling by human since humans' skin have collagen.
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- T P O 20 - Integrated TOEFL essay 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...t none of these arguments is correct. Firstly, the author states that small br...
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...of moist residue of bacteria colony. Moreover, the author asserts that micros...
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Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
...s, the color of the spheres might could be cause of reddish materials. Eventuall...
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Suggestion:
...could be cause of reddish materials. Eventually, the reading passage holds th...
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have never been
..., on the other hand, says that collagen never have been found older than 100 million years. The...
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...explains that collagen could be remained on these bones after handling by human s...
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Suggestion:
... human since humans skin have collagen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, conversely, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 244.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06147540984 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49504682662 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6908947475 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.916666667 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413336866887 0.272083759551 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141470747907 0.0996497079465 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941239550291 0.0662205650399 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223031759292 0.162205337803 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710142496392 0.0443174109184 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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