TPO 52- Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice. There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system. Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet, Mars, some think that sending people to an asteroid would actually be the best colonization option for a number of reasons
The reading and lecture are both about asteroids as best colonization option. The author of the reading believes that people living on asteroids are possible due to three reasons that are proposed. However, the lecturer casts doubts about the claims in the article and refutes all the theories presented. She says that the ideas are not practical and has serious downside.
First of all, the author points out that asteroids has low gravitational force. It is mentioned that landing on asteroids are not difficult task to do, so, it is much easier to take off again and need less fuel on its trip back to earth. Conversely, the point is challenged by the lecturer. She says that low gravity on the asteroids pose health risks for the astronomers. Moreover, she argues that the effects are loss of muscle mass and bone density even on few months of travel. In addition, spending long periods of months on asteroid can lead to serious health problems.
Secondly, the author contends that there are abundant supply of metals and minerals in asteroid environment. The article notes that exploration to asteroids can provide with extensive source of gold and platinum which can be profitable. On the contrary, the lecturer rebuts this argument. She suggests that minerals that are abundant in asteroid are profitable idea but it is not the whole picture. Furthermore, she elaborates on this by mentioning that additional factor must be taken into consideration such as cost supply transportation which can reduce the profit for the metals. Also, there is no guarantee that the price would be the same because there will be high supply of these minerals and metals and the price can drastically decline.
Finally, the author states that asteroids are accessible to reach. The article establishes that the earth's orbit are closer to asteroids and so it is affordable to travel there and easier to travel back and forth. The lecture, on the other hand, posits that it is not easy to return to the earth because the earth orbit travel is unpredictable. She puts forth the idea that earth's orbit are close to asteroid when traveling to it, but it moves away as the spaceship will return back to earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 472, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...but it moves away as the spaceship will return back to earth.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, such as, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.4613686534 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 371.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93261455526 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61722985438 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504043126685 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 419.366225166 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1557196135 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.55 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117186023403 0.272083759551 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040342598179 0.0996497079465 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309535070322 0.0662205650399 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750232243756 0.162205337803 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204140225897 0.0443174109184 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 63.6247240618 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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