tpo15
In this set of materials, both listening and reading passage discuses about solution to control the population of cane toad at the Australia. The passage states some specific methods like: national fence, volunteer activity to capture them, and using the disease-causing virus; however, the lecturer has contradicted view point toward this issues.
First, the passage maintains to national fence as a possible solution to prevent this species to spread among the Australia; however, the lecturer mentions to river or water ways, which make this barrier ineffective in some regain; in this condition young Cane or eggs of them easily can deliver by water and established new life in other environment.
Second, the lecture states that this Cane can easily be captured by simple traps or even by hands; thus, it seems a good idea to ask some volunteers for help. On the other hands, the professor provides an other aspects to this idea, which makes it invaluable, as she mentions this project causes other species which are native with the Australia`s nature to be endanger; like frogs.
Finally, the reading part provides an idea of usage of disease-causing viruses to control this species population as a decent idea. The lecturer mentions to other points of view, which opposes with this proposal. As she states using of virus is a dangerous idea, which makes ecological disasters in whole the world as this species captured by pet-collector or researchers and conveyed to the another area like America cause other species to be in danger.
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both listening and reading passage discuses about solution to control the population of cane toad at the Australia.
both listening and reading passage discuss about the solutions to control the population of cane toad at Australia.
Sentence: however, the lecturer has contradicted view point toward this issues.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and issues
the professor provides an other aspects
the professor provides another aspect
to be endanger
to be dangerous
to be in danger
provides an idea of usage of disease-causing viruses to control
provides an idea of using disease-causing viruses to control
as this species captured by pet-collector
as the species can be captured by pet-collector
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 17 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 12
No. of Words: 252 250
No. of Characters: 1256 1200
No. of Different Words: 135 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.984 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.984 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.635 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 31.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.019 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.439 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.705 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.19 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4