tpo40
The reading passage discusses the reasons why it is impossible to maintain a human presence on Venus. However, the lecturer disagrees with the passage. He claims that a floating station 50 kilometers above the Venus surface is definitely practical.
The reading first points out that the atmospheric pressure on Venus' surface is too great for even machines to handle, let alone humans. Yet a simple design is able to go around this obstacle. the professor argues that The atmospheric pressure decreases as one raises higher into the atmosphere. If the station is built 50 kilometers above the Venus surface, it is able to reduce the atmospheric pressure to the level of Earth's surface - a point that ordinary humans can handle.
The second reason given by the reading passage is the lack of water on Venus. There are no reservoirs of water on the Venusian surface and its atmosphere is made out of Carbon Dioxide, Nitrogen, and Sulfuric Acid. However, the lecturer points out that with the Hydrogen in Sulfuric Acid and the Oxygen in Carbon Dioxide, scientists are able to synthesize water out of them, therefore not needing to supply water from the earth.
The last problem proposed in the reading passage is the lack of electricity. Due to the hyper-reflective property of the Venusian atmosphere and cloud, it is hard to gather enough sunlight to generate enough electricity on the surface of Venus. Yet in the floating station design, the problem could be solved. It would be well above the thick clouds, so the 60 percent of the sunlight that passes through is well used. The station is able to collect sunlight not only from above but also from below where it is reflected by the thick Carbon Dioxide cloud. This way, the station is able to produce enough electricity of its daily usage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 305.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90819672131 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61117655157 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495081967213 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6665478633 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5625 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06452816374 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330203507156 0.272083759551 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972727408996 0.0996497079465 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599999569278 0.0662205650399 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184760035031 0.162205337803 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302966204102 0.0443174109184 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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