The diagram below gives the information about the Hawaiian island chain in the center of the Pacific Ocean.
The diagrammatically representation depicts the information about the Hawaiian island which is situated in the heart of the Pacific Ocean.It describes the procedure of volcano eruption.
It is evident from the chart that the there is solid dense rock bed onto which chain began to form nearly 80 years million ago.Furthermore, the first volcano was developed by enormous eruptions and this eruption was started from very below that was 2883 km. Further, hot spot remained stable. Hence, magma spume was formed.
Moving further, the wave direction was from the pacific plate to Hawaiian island and speed is 7-9 cm annually.Apart from this, the other major islands in the Pacific ocean are Niihau, Kauai, Oahu, Molokai, Maui, Lanai and Kahoolawe which are 0-100 kilometers away from each other.
To conclude, volcano develops if there are numerous eruption in the earth and it originate from very below. The chain starts after following various steps and shift speed id also fast
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Sentence: To conclude, volcano develops if there are numerous eruption in the earth and it originate from very below.
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