Some people believe that our ever-increasing use of technology significantly reduces our opportunities for human interaction. Other people believe that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another
Tasting the cherry lips of a beloved one is different from when you send a smiley _ :*_ to her _as a sign of kissing. However, we are increasingly more adopting the superficial means of communications which lacks natural emotional responses. In this sense, some believe that it is the use of technology, which increasingly forfeits us from having human interactions. Of course, with the technology the pure emotional levels of human interaction are getting farther as we are adapting to virtual communications. However, beholden to the same technology, we have advanced in our communications in prac...
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Sentence: Therefore, with the evolvement of our usage culture of both virtual world and the real communications, we hopefully would reap the benefits of both kinds of communications.
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