The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
Summarize the in formation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart gives information about the main reasons and why agricultural land becomes less productive while the table shows three regions of the world affected from these causes during 1990s. It is measured in percentage.
Firstly, the biggest reason for these causes was over-grazing with 35%. The second main reason with 30% was deforestation and the third was over-cultivation with 28%. Other causes for wordlide land degradation was little - only 7%. However, the biggest reason in Europe for this problem was not over-grazing which was 5.5%, but was deforestation with 9.8%. Over-cultivation was on the second place with 7.7%.
In 1990s, Oceania's was not over-cultivated, but was deforestated with only 1.7% and over-grazed significantly - 11.3%. In North America, over-grazing was slight - only 1.5%, similary was over-cultivation - 3,3% and even less was deforestation - only 0.2%.
To sum up, it can be seen that the biggest total land dagradation for 1990s was in Europe with 23%. The second was in Oceania with 13% and the smallest degradation was seen in North America.
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three regions of the world affected from these causes during 1990s
three regions of the world were affected from these causes during 1990s
Sentence: Other causes for wordlide land degradation was little - only 7.
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Sentence: In 1990s, Oceania's was not over-cultivated, but was deforestated with only 1.7 and over-grazed significantly - 11.3.
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Sentence: In North America, over-grazing was slight - only 1.5, similary was over-cultivation - 3,3 and even less was deforestation - only 0.2.
Error: similary Suggestion: similar
Sentence: To sum up, it can be seen that the biggest total land dagradation for 1990s was in Europe with 23.
Error: dagradation Suggestion: degradation
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