In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems and state which one do you think is better.
The number of divorced couples is far high in countries which practice a tradition to arrange marriages, while this is significantly less in democratic countries; nonetheless, those countries appear to continue the tradition despite the substantial number of divorce. In my opinion, marriages should not be predetermined in terms of demography and economy.
Arranged marriages have a direct contribution to the reduced number of birthrate since couples who are forced to get married usually get divorced within a year without having a chance to conceive a child. This practice is conducted and believed to be successful among wealthy families since it is undesirable to share their fortune with plebs; however, it is the unsuccessful approach for average since they constitute of the main proportion of overall population. Thus, the more predetermined marriages, especially among the middle-class population, the less number of birthrate, which, in turn, decreases the chance of a country to prosper as the country will experience employee scarcity in the foreseeable future.
The decreased number of population inevitably affects economy of a country since it shrinks the number of taxpayers and laborers, which triggers a myriad of social problems. The government with negative budget balance, for instance, can not afford to construct infrastructures, which is vital to prosper and to develop for a country. Moreover, when those couples who divorced due to arranged marriages, as a result lack of any children, are predicted to be an additional burden to the governmental budget since the government will have taken care of them when they are retired.
The tradition of arranging marriage has a direct effect on the prosperity of a country. Thus, it is critical that a marriage is not predetermined; otherwise, it has a dramatic adverse effect on development of a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for instance', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233128834356 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.150306748466 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0889570552147 0.0946595960268 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0490797546012 0.0501214627716 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0306748466258 0.0437548338989 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134969325153 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0398773006135 0.0403226058552 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.17011364599 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0429447852761 0.0326793684256 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.122699386503 0.0861772015684 142% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0122699386503 0.021408717616 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0245398773006 0.011925033212 206% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1888.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.42176870748 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.459183673469 0.374742101984 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.367346938776 0.28420135186 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.285714285714 0.203846283523 140% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.187074829932 0.137316102897 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17011364599 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 53.7651693239 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 29.4 20.7743622355 142% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.280624997 49.517814964 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.8 127.492653851 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7743622355 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 0.814263465372 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 66.1346938776 49.1944974215 134% => OK
Elegance: 1.77333333333 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184222728186 0.332605444948 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.151048308561 0.102741220458 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.085500994571 0.0668466124924 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.655913602143 0.534860350844 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116265321708 0.148594505496 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983355545688 0.134430193775 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046503410062 0.0742795772207 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.398128356533 0.324371583561 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.129655069073 0.0638462369009 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140154973139 0.228012699653 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578175547215 0.058150111329 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9