“Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.”
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Diseases are now seriously threatening to our planet. In this world, billions of people have been dead because of various types of health problems such as epidemic diseases, incurable illness, obesity,… This is the reason why the government expend a huge amount of country’s heath finances for cure related education as well as preventative measures.
Over centuries, people have to suffer new sort of diseases which is hard to cure and interfered. By using technological advancement, some kind of illnesses are sovled. Nevertheless, many types of them have not been cured or the cost of the treatment is very expensive. So far so good, this is not the best way to protect people’s health. It is found out that each diseases has a suitable way to penetrate and harm to our body. If we research and clog the way for the illness to intrude, we can prevent them from harming our lives better than spend a huge proportion of money to treat the victims. This is the effective way to protect our health frequently and durably.
Through health education, effectual preventative measure can be extended to all of people. As an example, if the government determines the reason of health problems for human bodies are smoking, drinking and so on, by the educational programs, people can realize that they are harmful for them and stop thus they will be attacked by severe diseases. This also could save a large amount of money of the state.
In the nutshell, health education and preventative measure should be promoted as it helps protect people health affectively as well as bring colossal economical benefit to the government.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'kind of', 'sort of', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235099337748 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.162251655629 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0960264900662 0.0946595960268 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0629139072848 0.0501214627716 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0430463576159 0.0437548338989 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12582781457 0.122226691241 103% => OK
Participles: 0.046357615894 0.0403226058552 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80774427742 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0364238410596 0.0326793684256 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0927152317881 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0198675496689 0.021408717616 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00662251655629 0.011925033212 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1638.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 316.048096192 86% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362637362637 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282051282051 0.28420135186 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212454212454 0.203846283523 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135531135531 0.137316102897 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80774427742 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.9884640198 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.3099502158 49.517814964 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 49.2051282051 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.51851851852 1.69124875643 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29535938477 0.332605444948 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0921265020948 0.102741220458 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0521642941728 0.0668466124924 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.591848637335 0.534860350844 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.214008037957 0.148594505496 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130549650118 0.134430193775 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531346008899 0.0742795772207 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.294215318921 0.324371583561 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0283659619671 0.0638462369009 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187267853764 0.228012699653 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234105232008 0.058150111329 40% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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