People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
People are quick to blame others when a situation goes awry and they find themselves in trouble, whether it’s with the law or with a loved one. Some people believe that their behavior is determined by forces not of their own making but actually, their behavior is not determined by any outside force. People are responsible for their own behavior, people can ignore the outside forces, and perhaps they are even influenced by something other than the outside forces.
People are responsible for their own behavior. When a driver is pulled over for drinking and driving and charged with a DUI by the law enforcement, the defendant will go to court and attempt to save themselves from going to jail. During the court preceding’s the defendant and their lawyer bring up others who may have influenced them to drink and drive but in reality it is the driver’s own fault. They decided to drink alcohol and to get behind the wheel of a car when they know that it is illegal for anyone to be drunk and driving. Imagine if the drunk driver had not have been caught and could have killed themselves or someone else.
While people are responsible for their own behavior they also tend ignore the outside forces. Take for example, a troubled teenage boy who hangs out with the wrong crowd despite his parent’s attempts to steer him in the correct passage. His parent’s make sure that he goes to counseling each week and that he attends church each Sunday in hopes that one of the sermons will sink into his head. While the boy keeps on hanging with the bad crowd and creates more trouble, it is in this instance that the boy is ignoring those outside forces that are telling him to stay straight and to listen to his parents.
Yes, people are responsible for their own behavior and they can ignore the good influenced outside forces, however, people can also be influenced by something other than the outside forces. Perhaps the troubled teenage boy mentioned earlier is actually suffering from a mental capability and this could lead him to the actions that he is creating. Deep down he wants to stay straight to please his parents since he really loves them, but there is another voice in his head that is telling him to stay in the bad crowd and to do the wrong things.
People’s behavior is not determined by the outside forces given; people are responsible for their own behavior and can ignore the outside forces. But in retrospect, people can be influenced by something other than the outside forces leading them to erratic behavior. People need to begin to take responsibility for their own actions and to not be so quick to blame it on someone else.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... straight and to listen to his parents. Yes, people are responsible for their ow...
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...e bad crowd and to do the wrong things. People's behavior is not determined...
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Suggestion: forces'; force's
...havior is not determined by the outside forces given; people are responsible for their...
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...orces leading them to erratic behavior. People need to begin to take responsibil...
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...e so quick to blame it on someone else.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'while', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197318007663 0.240241500013 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.180076628352 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0862068965517 0.0880659088768 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.044061302682 0.0497285424764 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0804597701149 0.0444667217837 181% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.109195402299 0.12292977631 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0478927203065 0.0406280797675 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52139304492 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.044061302682 0.030933414821 142% => OK
Particles: 0.00574712643678 0.0016655270985 345% => OK
Determiners: 0.0785440613027 0.0997080785238 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0191570881226 0.0249443105267 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0134099616858 0.0148568991511 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2712.0 2732.02544248 99% => OK
No of words: 467.0 452.878318584 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80728051392 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321199143469 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235546038544 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132762312634 0.200843997647 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0856531049251 0.132149295362 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52139304492 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 219.290929204 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419700214133 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.5170582703 55.4138127331 84% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.9444444444 23.380412469 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4708831581 59.4972553346 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.666666667 141.124799967 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9444444444 23.380412469 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 49.4990482988 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.16352201258 1.64882698954 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388552590759 0.391690518653 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150006349067 0.123202303941 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.128007759228 0.077325440228 166% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.565700289154 0.547984918172 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143930465856 0.149214159877 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180347780941 0.161403998019 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462344586771 0.0892212321368 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.470409186678 0.385218514788 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0846795612826 0.0692045440612 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293216239018 0.275328986314 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192509383395 0.0653680567796 29% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.30420353982 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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