Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What can be done to make families closer?
Recently, unfortunately children and their parents are less close to each other. In this essay we need to investigate what are the causes of this situation and what are the solutions to resolve that.
In my point of view two major reasons lead families to have less cordiality. Firstly, both parents often work full time these days, so they spend less time with their children. In addition the busy parents have less contact with their children in order to understand the kids' problems that they are struggling with. Secondly, the majority of the children prefer to spend most of their time with friends or surfing the net or watching Television. For Instance, children eager to go camping with their friend in holidays instead of spending time with parents. As another example children prefer to use their interesting gadgets instead of interact with their parents efficiently. Generally, the factors mentioned above create a massive relationship distance between the family members.
Actually, some solution exists which are going to be discussed here. First of all, it would have a significant positive impact if parents more involved with their children's upbringing. For example, play with their children and in the game the can teach them essential facts of the life. Second of all, it is an absolute fact that children especially the teenagers influenced by the peer pressure or internet and television, that means these sort of stuff might changed their behavior; therefore, parents should look for interesting plans to encourage their children to spend their time with them hence, they could keep the children under their observation.
In conclusion, these days, huge distance between family members is obvious and as we mentioned above, it would be because of some common factor; furthermore, a collection of extremely helpful solutions are given.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ality. Firstly, both parents often work full time these days, so they spend less time wit...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...spend less time with their children. In addition the busy parents have less contact with...
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Line 3, column 560, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... instead of spending time with parents. As another example children prefer to use ...
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Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
... or internet and television, that means these sort of stuff might changed their behavior; ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p the children under their observation. In conclusion, these days, huge distance...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'sort of', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253776435045 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.138972809668 0.155533422707 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0634441087613 0.0946595960268 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0513595166163 0.0501214627716 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0725075528701 0.0437548338989 166% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.135951661631 0.122226691241 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0302114803625 0.0403226058552 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64662793582 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332326283988 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0936555891239 0.0861772015684 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0181268882175 0.021408717616 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012084592145 0.011925033212 101% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1867.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26510067114 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369127516779 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.315436241611 0.28420135186 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224832214765 0.203846283523 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127516778523 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64662793582 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 61.2399742251 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.2857142857 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0392890736 49.517814964 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.357142857 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 0.814263465372 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 52.8293384468 49.1944974215 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.59770114943 1.69124875643 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257898509615 0.332605444948 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10923483086 0.102741220458 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.089452649444 0.0668466124924 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552268996417 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.220666493094 0.148594505496 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111305175384 0.134430193775 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784004654047 0.0742795772207 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.32473730857 0.324371583561 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.168480038548 0.0638462369009 264% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191910965349 0.228012699653 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847030497367 0.058150111329 146% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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