The twentieth century saw great change. In your opinion what is one change that should be remembered about the twentieth century.
In today's hectic world which life has trials and tribulations all people around the globe looking for better life. People have different point of view about changing in lifestyle regarding the trends of modern world. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether twentieth century experienced a great change or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that development of medical science is one of the significant changes in twentieth century, which revolutionized people's life. In the following paragraph I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that in the past people confronted trials and tribulations in cure different kinds of diseases. Scientifically speaking, due to paucity of knowledge and research scholars were not able to patronize people from various illnesses. Indeed, hardly ever people survived against those harmful diseases. Actually, not only did people suffer from various pain and ill but also did not lead a healthy lifestyle. But nowadays, with the development of technology in the field of medical branches, vast majorities of people are providing with a great opportunity to cure for many diseases. Delving further into the issue reveal that technological advancement provide fertile ground for scientist to enhance treatment of people. In fact, improvement of medical science allows people benefits from various facilities in this realm. In addition, new medicine and new diagnostic techniques have been developed in twentieth century. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country; show that before twentieth century people suffered from different kinds of cancer, which scholars have had not any method to treat the cancers. Finally, advent of modern technology and higher education in twentieth century enable scientist to discover the influential method to cure cancers.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is enhancement of genetic engineering in this realm, which provides scholars a great opportunity to use this field of study in medical science. Broadly speaking, genetic engineering is the practice of manipulating the genes of an organism, which not only can use to cure diseases but also can use to change human's genetic characteristics. To put it in other word, scholars replaced genetic engineering with other method of treatment that not only are not useful but also in some case put people in danger. Indeed, scientists can cure patient through their genes, which have not been improved until twentieth century. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, medical science have not been developed by arriving twentieth century. As a matter of fact, there are various kind of diseases that have not cured yet due to the paucity of knowledge and technological advancement. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, there are vast majorities of improvement in twentieth century, one of which is development of medical branches. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that with the enhancement of medical science various diseases cured through modern technology day in day out. In addition, genetic engineering is one of the most important field in medical science which provide scholars with second solution to cure patients.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 919, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
... As a matter of fact, there are various kind of diseases that have not cured yet due...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'as a matter of fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252459016393 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.150819672131 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.118032786885 0.0866891130778 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0704918032787 0.046263068375 152% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0147540983607 0.0685040099705 22% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.13606557377 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0459016393443 0.0351676179071 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98406557402 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0295081967213 0.0309702414327 95% => OK
Particles: 0.00327868852459 0.00188951952338 174% => OK
Determiners: 0.0704918032787 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00819672131148 0.0209618222197 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0213114754098 0.0139019557991 153% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3580.0 2387.08602151 150% => OK
No of words: 555.0 408.028673835 136% => OK
Chars per words: 6.45045045045 5.86048508987 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.448648648649 0.338922669872 132% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.356756756757 0.251872472559 142% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.25045045045 0.174417080927 144% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.176576576577 0.112833075102 156% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98406557402 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47027027027 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.0253874206 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3461538462 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2260972937 48.84282405 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.692307692 120.699889404 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3461538462 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 57.0218295218 45.7405998639 125% => OK
Elegance: 1.84027777778 1.45489161554 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291667469668 0.300154397459 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0864102635844 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0655025274391 0.0752933317313 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.453624258411 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143581843588 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109069955535 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755613019022 0.0781384742642 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.480645301882 0.336927656856 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0377614269749 0.067059652881 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239503582679 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724748722865 0.0618886996521 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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