The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Submitted by FlorinHF on Tue, 07/26/2016 - 11:18

The bar chart provides information about the number of Japanese people who travel in foreign countries. Also, line graph illustrates the percentage of Japan tourist market which belongs to Australia. Figures are presented yearly, over a ten-year period, starting in 1985.

Overall, both charts reveal a gradual increase both of Japan inhabitants who visited foreign countries and the percentage which Australia has in Japan. Between 1985 and 1988 the figures for Japanese travellers increased slightly for above forty million to more than double. The same trend of rise took place in case of Australia market share, but this year the figures hit a peak of approximately 4,8%. This was followed by a dip, in 1989, which accounts for less than 4,3%. Compared with those who decided to visit other countries, immediately after 1989, number of Japanese tourists in Australia soared reaching, in 1993, a percentage of 6,1. After this period figures decreased to 6% in 1995, while in the same year Japan inhabitants who decided to visit foreign countries accounted for 15 million.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...resented yearly, over a ten-year period, starting in 1985. Overall, both chart...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'so', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263959390863 0.268076937826 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.126903553299 0.116061578633 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0710659898477 0.0759168565197 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0304568527919 0.0366838410393 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.157360406091 0.155750635184 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0253807106599 0.0379272487307 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64084050217 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0253807106599 0.0210936926555 120% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0964467005076 0.0948980150116 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0355329949239 0.00967000014798 367% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1082.0 1161.00487805 93% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.9 88% => OK
Chars per words: 6.25433526012 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387283236994 0.337110787985 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.317919075145 0.247514529752 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21387283237 0.171178102325 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132947976879 0.112407865282 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64084050217 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618497109827 0.546246751206 113% => OK
Word variations: 57.8109459851 49.3433353143 117% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2222222222 23.0094962315 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0177876492 42.9750493124 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.222222222 135.714022679 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 23.0094962315 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.689975730869 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.84146341463 52% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 51.0141297367 47.7609492067 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.83870967742 2.94281807926 96% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337412354767 0.418131533498 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.080078215858 0.181151798455 44% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0786321011753 0.0850326197045 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487882410161 0.706616315825 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0977527593405 0.157042692854 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159841403499 0.228904883108 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972197262436 0.108899403657 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.436017608872 0.367819155151 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0812612215331 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298009818042 0.316326947829 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00464389731342 0.0921553760075 5% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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