The following appeared in a letter sent by a committee of homeowners from the Deerhaven Acres
to all homeowners in Deerhaven Acres.
"Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions
on how the community's yards should be landscaped and what colors the exteriors of homes should be painted.
Since then, average property values have tripled in Brookville.
In order to raise property values in Deerhaven Acres,
we should adopt our own set of restrictions on landscaping and housepainting."
In this letter the committee of homeowners believes that adopting our own restrictions on landscaping and
housepainting they will be able to increase the average property values in Derhaven acres in similar case
tripling the values in Brookville. I dont beleive that the committee have got valid points in this letter
to their all homeowners; as there are many flaws in it.
To begin with we have no idea how many homeowners were living in brookville nor proper specification
of increase in average property values in brookville as in letter it is mentioned that since then
which doesnot give any relation of the increase in average property values in brookville due to the
adopted set of restrictions ; it can many other possible reasons also.
Description is also not properly mentioned of both the situation as we have no idea about the earlier condition
of homeowners communitys yards and exterior of home nor the previous property price of brookville
which seems very important detail to fill in for the comparison between the price of property values
between brookville and deerhavens acres.
Further , If the property value of Deerhaven acres is already on the highest point while previously
brookville property price where at nadir there are less chances of Deerhaven acres to increase property
values in compare to Brookville which thriples its property values.
As mentioned in letter seven years ago which doesnot set a relevant situation for both the property values
comparison as its a long year of span and many factors can change in that span such like surrounding
development , financial conditions to afford the changes on landscaping and housepainting , economical
condition of property values during that time and current time. Thus letter is unconvincing.
To strengthen the arguement proper details with speicific dates , economical condition and property values
during that time and current time must be mentioned.
Moreover , to better evaluate the arguement we would need more information and broad perspective rather
than poor information provided in letter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e tripling the values in Brookville. I dont beleive that the committee have got val...
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Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in it. To begin with we have no idea how many homeowners were living in brook...
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Line 9, column 66, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ns ; it can many other possible reasons also. Description is also not properly me...
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Line 15, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rookville and deerhavens acres. Further , If the property value of Deerhaven acre...
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Line 16, column 52, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...property price where at nadir there are less chances of Deerhaven acres to increase ...
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Line 20, column 15, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...both the property values comparison as its a long year of span and many factors ca...
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Line 21, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... span such like surrounding development , financial conditions to afford the chan...
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Line 21, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...changes on landscaping and housepainting , economical condition of property value...
^^
Line 23, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ment proper details with speicific dates , economical condition and property value...
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Line 24, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndition and property values during that time and current time must be mentioned....
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Line 25, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...urrent time must be mentioned. Moreover , to better evaluate the arguement we wou...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'while', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292753623188 0.25644967241 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.133333333333 0.15541462614 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101449275362 0.0836205057962 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405797101449 0.0520304965353 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0347826086957 0.0272364105082 128% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.16231884058 0.125424944231 129% => OK
Participles: 0.0376811594203 0.0416121511921 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89940653471 2.79052419416 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0289855072464 0.026700313972 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0869565217391 0.113004496875 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0144927536232 0.0255425247493 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0173913043478 0.0127820249294 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2107.0 2731.13054187 77% => OK
No of words: 335.0 446.07635468 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.28955223881 6.12365571057 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.57801047555 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397014925373 0.378187486979 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.319402985075 0.287650121315 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.24776119403 0.208842608468 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158208955224 0.135150697306 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89940653471 2.79052419416 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 207.018472906 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50447761194 0.469332199767 107% => OK
Word variations: 52.257645432 52.1807786196 100% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.039408867 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 37.2222222222 23.2022227129 160% => OK
Sentence length SD: 116.811761627 57.7814097925 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 234.111111111 141.986410481 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2222222222 23.2022227129 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.724660767414 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 5.14285714286 447% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 11.0 3.58251231527 307% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 69.1625207297 51.9672348444 133% => OK
Elegance: 2.36111111111 1.8405768891 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380222315461 0.441005458295 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.188128360133 0.135418324435 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.125038950927 0.0829849096947 151% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.941889184824 0.58762219726 160% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150970559751 0.147661913831 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192938165318 0.193483328276 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108779028818 0.0970749176394 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.119772578594 0.42659136922 28% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0868392333849 0.0774707102158 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138184050803 0.312017818177 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792305061917 0.0698173142475 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.33743842365 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.87684729064 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 14.657635468 27% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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