"A nation should adopt same curriculum before entering student to college"
In the given issue, author says that the students of any particular nation should study the same syllabus all over the country. With this the author is trying to have revolution for equality among the nation. I am agree with this thought due to some pros of this revolution but, there are also some cons of this study system also.
Firstly, due to this type of teaching scheme, there will be equality in all the students at the stage of their teaching strength. After studying the same course, while entering into college, the students will become more comfortable with other students than that stage when they have studied partially curriculums, regarding their state. So this will be more beneficial to the country at the end of this type which author suggests.
Secondly, because all the students have studied the same thing, there will be a basic lower limit, that every student in that country will know that thing will lead the country to the total growth in the education level. There will be one benchmark related to study about that country at the end of this authors's admirable suggestion.
We can properly understand this type of system with the country Germany. I'm not saying that their students are studying the same curriculum but, If one have to enter their country for any particular degree, applying in that country, they will ask for germen language. If you are not given that exam or if you are not known to their language, they will not accept your application also. Hence, their benchmark according to this topic is we can say that "German language is must".
In the consession point, i will also argue or disagree with author that due to applying this type of system, the burdon on all the students will be same. So that the student with lower grasping power will fail to stand with this type of system. In addition, the literature of any particular state will also become lowered due to the same curriculum all over the nation. The students with their projected dream will also have to compromise with the studying system. But this type of stydying system will help them at the end to stand with world.
In sum, i totally support the author about this idea of teaching. So that no student in any college will undermine him/herself about the level of study. So i am in favour with the author and suggests that this type of education system would be adopted sooner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226781857451 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.142548596112 0.157235817809 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0539956803456 0.0880659088768 61% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0410367170626 0.0497285424764 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0388768898488 0.0444667217837 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149028077754 0.12292977631 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0475161987041 0.0406280797675 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35274888216 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0302375809935 0.030933414821 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.136069114471 0.0997080785238 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0453563714903 0.0249443105267 182% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00863930885529 0.0148568991511 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2415.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 418.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77751196172 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.299043062201 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227272727273 0.280924506359 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16028708134 0.200843997647 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0861244019139 0.132149295362 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35274888216 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421052631579 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.0627024808 55.4138127331 81% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9 23.380412469 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9209738939 59.4972553346 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 141.124799967 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 23.380412469 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 43.6272727273 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.90291262136 1.64882698954 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113523434776 0.391690518653 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.148514016253 0.123202303941 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0688218213267 0.077325440228 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.630821598624 0.547984918172 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.117192049407 0.149214159877 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506912626465 0.161403998019 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401188027009 0.0892212321368 45% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.387169279913 0.385218514788 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0771295537142 0.0692045440612 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702530157896 0.275328986314 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247517781052 0.0653680567796 38% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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