Educational institutions should dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Educational institutions are centrers of excellence where students are educated and groomed to take on the world and
hopefully become subject experts like the teachers they were students of.Hence i partially agree with students
must be made aware of there there strengths and guide them to a path where they will most likely succeed.However
there are some contradictory cases where the person has found immense success in field they were not expected to
succeed.
To Begin with,any field would require certain important traits which is considered essential to succeed in the said field.
Such as field of science and engineering requires immense interest in mathematics and a student who is not interested in mathematics
is unlikely to succeed in the engineering as well.Similarly vivid imaginations is an essential trait for sci-fi fiction writer.
a teacher who most likely has spent there life's dedicated to the field of study would readily able identify these important
skills.
Additionally,Students may have the wrong idea about the field itself and teacher can enlighten the students
about the ground realities. For example, A student may be very interested in driving cars,it obvious that
the student may mistake automobile designing as correct field of study, but a learned automobile design is
not even remotely connect to driving car is rather a field of engineering which requires immense knowledge in
engineering principles.For example,I was loved playing computer games and wanted to become a game designer
but i was made aware that game design is a dedicated computer science field,this knowledge helped me to build
the prerequisites for the a game designers job.
Conversely,There have be instances were students were deemed unfit for the field of study, but they went on to create
some of the greatest ground breaking theories regarding the field.One of the best examples would be, like of Edison,
Edison was relegated from the classroom deemed too stupid to continue education.However today we are grateful
for the contribution of Alva Edison for his contribution to the field of physics.
To sum it up, Teacher play a very important role in any students education and teacher can make sure that the
student are aware about the challenges in the field of study.Then Students can take informed decision regarding
there future.
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- The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority. 50
- In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions. 54
- Educational institutions should dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed. 50
- "The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. " 58
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'conversely', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2625 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.1875 0.157235817809 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0875 0.0880659088768 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.05 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.03 0.0444667217837 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11 0.12292977631 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0475 0.0406280797675 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02590170039 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.035 0.030933414821 113% => OK
Particles: 0.0025 0.0016655270985 150% => OK
Determiners: 0.1 0.0997080785238 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0275 0.0249443105267 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0175 0.0148568991511 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2378.0 2732.02544248 87% => OK
No of words: 374.0 452.878318584 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35828877005 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387700534759 0.366273622748 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.323529411765 0.280924506359 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227272727273 0.200843997647 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139037433155 0.132149295362 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02590170039 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513368983957 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 55.5472920857 55.4138127331 100% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6194690265 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 46.75 23.380412469 200% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 161.334231876 59.4972553346 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 297.25 141.124799967 211% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.75 23.380412469 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.75 0.674092028746 260% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.94800884956 424% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 32.0 5.21349557522 614% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 79.1029411765 51.4728631049 154% => OK
Elegance: 1.57009345794 1.64882698954 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259132723834 0.391690518653 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141882610766 0.123202303941 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0566991233619 0.077325440228 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.961625751384 0.547984918172 175% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136982767367 0.149214159877 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136204161433 0.161403998019 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645444649838 0.0892212321368 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.112490647963 0.385218514788 29% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0391935290803 0.0692045440612 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958998339131 0.275328986314 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518031243831 0.0653680567796 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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