the smith corporation should not be permitted to develop the land that is now part of the Youngstown wildlife preserve this sanctuary is essential to the survival of the 300 bird species that live in our area. Although only a small percentage of the land will be sold smith,the proposed development will have disastrous consequences for our area. the company plans to build a small hotel on the land.although they have promised to ensure the preservation of the sanctuary,there is no way that their plans will do anything but harm the sanctuary there are no circumstances under which this sale will benefit our community which relies on tourists who visit primarily to see our magnificent bird population.
The argument topic i am not satisfide to this concusion because of the othur said the smith corporation permitted to devlop the land is now on part and yong wildlife preserve and all the other things of it is devloping to this area and to land use to new hotel.The other side benifit of the area is community which relish on tourists visit primarily to see the magnification bird population.
The smith corporation to devlop there area but is inveted to the more money of the land and to deplop the area and it is in this place we have construted the hotel and all tha things so enviroment effet is there and more to the polustion.The smith corporation to devlop that aera very greatfully but other problem is there so we have concusion that smith corporation to deplop the aera but one by one and more efficently.
The smith corporation is essential to hte survival of the 300 bird pecies that live in our area. it's bird in our aera so the visiter of the our area is visit to the primarily to see oue magnisicent bird population. but the other think is the smith,the proposed deplopment will have disastrous conqueces for the area .
The company plans to build up to the hotel and demage to the other preservation of the sanctuary, there plan will do anything but harm the sansuary
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254166666667 0.25644967241 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.15 0.15541462614 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0916666666667 0.0836205057962 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.05 0.0520304965353 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0333333333333 0.0272364105082 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.075 0.125424944231 60% => OK
Participles: 0.0208333333333 0.0416121511921 50% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66775398882 2.79052419416 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.075 0.026700313972 281% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00416666666667 0.001811407834 230% => OK
Determiners: 0.133333333333 0.113004496875 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00833333333333 0.0255425247493 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00833333333333 0.0127820249294 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1291.0 2731.13054187 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 446.07635468 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54077253219 6.12365571057 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.57801047555 85% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.231759656652 0.378187486979 61% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.188841201717 0.287650121315 66% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163090128755 0.208842608468 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128755364807 0.135150697306 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66775398882 2.79052419416 96% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 207.018472906 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454935622318 0.469332199767 97% => OK
Word variations: 40.3913089063 52.1807786196 77% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.039408867 30% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 38.8333333333 23.2022227129 167% => OK
Sentence length SD: 138.842136576 57.7814097925 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.166666667 141.986410481 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8333333333 23.2022227129 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.724660767414 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 3.58251231527 391% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 57.717453505 51.9672348444 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.5 1.8405768891 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.679988874862 0.441005458295 154% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.344719397766 0.135418324435 255% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0951292806899 0.0829849096947 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.875619793223 0.58762219726 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129737060306 0.147661913831 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.490942601912 0.193483328276 254% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887750547033 0.0970749176394 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.52579383994 0.42659136922 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0488815013264 0.0774707102158 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.527915931259 0.312017818177 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911434246903 0.0698173142475 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.33743842365 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 0.0 6.46551724138 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 3.0 14.657635468 20% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.