Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days, our life has dramatically changed rather than 30 years ago. New technologies have made new lifestyle which have effected every ones' aspect of life. None of the traditional rules can be effective, and people are likely to follow the new rules. The most important changes are related to families. In the past, families have a vital role in forming of every one's identity, but today, it has evolved to friends, society, and of course new media. So families cannot be effective in children's decision no more. So I agree with the statement.
These days, extensive information resources are available, and people can access them in a fraction of time by the internet. So people, especially youngers who are more involved to the technologies, are more intelligent, and as most of people are educated, they are intellectual, and regard every one's freedom. So parents accept their children's ability for forming their life. For example, in the past, most people were farmer, artisan or labor. Rate of educated people were low, and the more experienced people were more reliable for consulting, and making decision. So as youngers have no experience and sufficient awareness, they had to follow their parents' decision.
Beside, now, people are more occupied with different problems such as daily duties, career, financial and personal problems. They have less time for allocating to their families. So children spend most of their time at school with their friends, or alone. This circumstance makes them so independent since childhood. So they are more able to decide for themselves, and also as parents are involved out of home, they can rely on their children's ability. Although children are more in danger of detrimental problems, they will have more opportunity for error and trial to be appropriate for making decision.
Furthermore, as I mentioned, by developing technologies, people's lifestyle have changed. These days, people have different and various communication with others. There are various devices for communicating such as; cellphone, internet, and social media. These situations have made people more social. They can communicate with others more easily. So they need more decision in their communication, for instance, in the past, especially in traditional countries, boys had to follow their parents decision for marriage. Their mothers proposed girls, and they had to obey due to lack of relationship, either girls did, but now, people have different situations for meeting people and then making decision, and families rely on them.
To sum up, every ones are free to decide for their life. No one can know them better than themselves. They are aware of their interests, characteristics, and situations. Although parents are closer ones to children, they cannot decide as well as themselves. As I mentioned, the advantages of this situation outweighs the disadvantages. They will learn the life matters by error and trial, as all the people have learnt during time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...hnologies, are more intelligent, and as most of people are educated, they are intellectual, an...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'of course', 'such as', 'as well as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236234458259 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.147424511545 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0941385435169 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0497335701599 0.046263068375 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0639431616341 0.0685040099705 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117229129663 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0373001776199 0.0351676179071 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85353766445 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0248667850799 0.0309702414327 80% => OK
Particles: 0.00177619893428 0.00188951952338 94% => OK
Determiners: 0.0515097690941 0.0887237588012 58% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0159857904085 0.0209618222197 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00355239786856 0.0139019557991 26% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3001.0 2387.08602151 126% => OK
No of words: 479.0 408.028673835 117% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26513569937 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.377870563674 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279749478079 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221294363257 0.174417080927 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.160751565762 0.112833075102 142% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85353766445 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469728601253 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.436572117 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6684587814 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.96875 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.476185561 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.78125 120.699889404 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.96875 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.40625 0.644075263715 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 42.9436978079 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.49659863946 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326812522895 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0933610428505 0.103427244359 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0640944290183 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.40681784679 0.497263757937 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13662442292 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109628099614 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649464896711 0.0781384742642 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.396669400105 0.336927656856 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0747847997908 0.067059652881 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233757305176 0.210909579961 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310364186562 0.0618886996521 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 11.0 2.75985663082 399% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 28.0 13.6433691756 205% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.