The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph indicates the temperature trend during the year in London, New York and Sydney.
The first thing we notice is the opposite behaviour of the average temperature in Sydney in relation to the other two cities.
In fact the temperature is about 25 degrees for the first three months of the year, while in London and New York the degrees are around 5 to 10.
In the spring time we can see an increment in New York and in London, touching the peaks at 30 degrees in New York and just under 24 degrees in London during the summer, before decreasing again from September to December.
In opposite to this trend, the temperature of Sydney begin to fall in April, reaching his trough in July. After that, it rise from just over 15 degrees to 25 degrees.
This trend can be explained looking the annual hours of sunshine for the three cities showed on the table below the graph.
We see that London has a fewer number of hours of sunshine than New York.
This factor could be the reason why London has lower temperatures during the summer.
While Sydney has brightened with almost the same number of hours of New York
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing again from September to December. In opposite to this trend, the temperature...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rises'?
Suggestion: rises
...hing his trough in July. After that, it rise from just over 15 degrees to 25 degrees...
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Line 11, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s lower temperatures during the summer. While Sydney has brightened with almost the s...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'look', 'so', 'while', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.310502283105 0.268076937826 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.100456621005 0.116061578633 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0456621004566 0.0759168565197 60% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0228310502283 0.0366838410393 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0228310502283 0.0131127313244 174% => OK
Prepositions: 0.187214611872 0.155750635184 120% => OK
Participles: 0.027397260274 0.0379272487307 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.28129349965 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027397260274 0.0210936926555 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.127853881279 0.0948980150116 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.013698630137 0.00437022459523 313% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00456621004566 0.00967000014798 47% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1124.0 1161.00487805 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.9 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53694581281 5.90752243213 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73763899035 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300492610837 0.337110787985 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.167487684729 0.247514529752 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.103448275862 0.171178102325 60% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.064039408867 0.112407865282 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28129349965 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532019704433 0.546246751206 97% => OK
Word variations: 47.3403807928 49.3433353143 96% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7357798635 42.9750493124 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 135.714022679 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.84146341463 234% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 37.0487684729 47.7609492067 78% => OK
Elegance: 3.59375 2.94281807926 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478710681819 0.418131533498 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.20118510796 0.181151798455 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.14442266334 0.0850326197045 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.92556023846 0.706616315825 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156389050117 0.157042692854 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.24548215311 0.228904883108 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131874805084 0.108899403657 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.254746413665 0.367819155151 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.165192293949 0.0812612215331 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268672422944 0.316326947829 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114445495152 0.0921553760075 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.