"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand our coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
The argument conculudes that attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, They should restore the time devoted to whether and alocal news to its former level. the auther view is the late night telicast the new of whether and local news .Moreover, this is not only reason mention that the viewer complained for the advertise.The argument is full of gaps and loop holes since it presents fregmentary evidnce.Niether are the primises convincing nor in the conclusion compelling .The argument is very evidently the reasult of a hasty generalization.
First of all, author claim on the late night new program on televison is reiceving more new on whether and local news rather than the national new.the quetion is that: the late night program is only reason of that the viewer is not interested to watch?on the full day the program shoes on local news and whether.so, thats the may be the the reason that the nation news is displayed at late night. Otherwise, the late night the viewer atterection is different area by area .the author is not completly mention that the which area are they talking about?
secondary, Business manager of the telivision station is to job at night so he show the program at night but nor for all that apply.that mension that othe reason that the advertise is more than the news.But, that's not mention that the howmany people watched at night and ration of people like the new or not.
Moreover,the author claim that the this advertise for only revenues is not only tha reason , some people like may this reasion is that.
The argument is the result of a huge speculation in which the author has comforthably considerable amount of data.Had the author taken tthe above discussed factor into view, it would have rendered the argument irrefutable. But whatever is presented fails to provide a holistic pictures to the superfluous claims being made.
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- "Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather an 48
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'talking about', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268786127168 0.25644967241 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.147398843931 0.15541462614 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104046242775 0.0836205057962 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0520231213873 0.0520304965353 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0173410404624 0.0272364105082 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132947976879 0.125424944231 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0375722543353 0.0416121511921 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65723262194 2.79052419416 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0231213872832 0.026700313972 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.14161849711 0.113004496875 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0115606936416 0.0255425247493 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00867052023121 0.0127820249294 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1932.0 2731.13054187 71% => OK
No of words: 325.0 446.07635468 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94461538462 6.12365571057 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.57801047555 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341538461538 0.378187486979 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246153846154 0.287650121315 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163076923077 0.208842608468 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110769230769 0.135150697306 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65723262194 2.79052419416 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 207.018472906 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498461538462 0.469332199767 106% => OK
Word variations: 50.885470677 52.1807786196 98% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.039408867 40% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 40.625 23.2022227129 175% => OK
Sentence length SD: 106.617819219 57.7814097925 185% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.5 141.986410481 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.625 23.2022227129 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 0.724660767414 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 3.58251231527 782% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 65.2403846154 51.9672348444 126% => OK
Elegance: 2.02666666667 1.8405768891 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297773268868 0.441005458295 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.237412378015 0.135418324435 175% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.126921347763 0.0829849096947 153% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.815958162741 0.58762219726 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167537801323 0.147661913831 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176413079576 0.193483328276 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803639991003 0.0970749176394 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.450891128624 0.42659136922 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.182069375311 0.0774707102158 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200465313834 0.312017818177 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855145209292 0.0698173142475 122% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.33743842365 36% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 14.657635468 55% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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