In many developing countries there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this.
Decreasing the air and water quality is the growing problem in most of the developing countries by different commercial enterprises and architectures. This is mainly because building constructions not echo friendly as well as the production companies are not practicing the proper disposal of waste materials. There are many effective solutions to tackle this problem, which should be implemented in government rules and follow up by the strict surveys.
Many cities in developing countries suffer a lot of health problems regarding the poisonous air and water. In other words, after products from big manufacture companies and new constructed buildings are leads to harmful effect on earth and thereby air, and water became polluted. Such problem affects the people health and their way of living. For example, thousands of people are suffering with lung cancer and renal failure in metropolitan cities of developing countries.
A possible solution to this fact that rule out government policies regard to the waste disposal and management of new constructions. Government should make commissions to check the harmful, repel from commercial industries and also apply such studies to prevent factors, which affecting the peoples' basic needs namely air and water. Furthermore, construction works must echo friendly and devastate predominate, oust materials like gases and exhaust from the industries that neither harm to nature nor creature. For instance, MRF is the famous rubber factory in India, which producing too many by-products of rubber, despite harm to the environment; they are converting such disposal to bio gas, as a result air and water are safe in nearby places.
To conclude, hiking number of buildings and corporations are indispensable in our day to day lives. Control the vulnerable air and water by rules and regulations, which are practiced in all minor and major industries and building constructors with the vast support of government and native commissions.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.322388059701 0.247107183377 130% => OK
Verbs: 0.137313432836 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10447761194 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0298507462687 0.0501214627716 60% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0089552238806 0.0437548338989 20% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.116417910448 0.122226691241 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0477611940299 0.0403226058552 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98741289499 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0328358208955 0.0326793684256 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00298507462687 0.00163938923432 182% => OK
Determiners: 0.0716417910448 0.0861772015684 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0089552238806 0.021408717616 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119402985075 0.011925033212 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2014.0 1933.35771543 104% => OK
No of words: 307.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.56026058632 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.42671009772 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322475570033 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.254071661238 0.203846283523 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.198697068404 0.137316102897 145% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98741289499 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589576547231 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 64.8952059413 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 23.6153846154 20.7743622355 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.650071129 49.517814964 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.923076923 127.492653851 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7743622355 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.814263465372 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.8629416186 49.1944974215 114% => OK
Elegance: 2.76271186441 1.69124875643 163% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407568617992 0.332605444948 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.090998132131 0.102741220458 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0316558913753 0.0668466124924 47% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600043810225 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0810718558907 0.148594505496 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185625978482 0.134430193775 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615144829288 0.0742795772207 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.37642553958 0.324371583561 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0453595335041 0.0638462369009 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291619029534 0.228012699653 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345652470438 0.058150111329 59% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.