Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the
way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today, many food products are instantly available and highly energetic. These products have great influence on my life and I certainly agree with the statement that today many foods have become easier to prepare.
First of all, easiness of making food has reduced the time.New food products like noodles, popcorns, fast-foods and other products which can be made within few minutes are too handy for the people who have a busy schedule.It also helps to serve the food faster in some crucial conditions.For example, I don't know how to cook the food. But, once I tried to make noodles at home and I just followed the guidelines on the package. I made the noodles in just 15 minutes. From then to now, these products have helped me many times when I have been alone at the home.
In addition, the process of making food has also changed due to the modernization of the facilities.The availability of modern tools in the kitchen makes it easier to prepare food on time. Tools like the lighter, new cookers, some types of equipment made with non-stick material etc. take a lower amount of time and also reduces some injuries caused by the kitchen-instruments.
Second, availability of some high energy products gives higher strength and much longer stamina.However, some of the fast-food products are not good for health and can make us lazy. The products made up of proteins and vitamins, available at medical stores and general stores, help to get instant energy without any cooking requirement.Whenever I don't have the time, I use these protein powders with milk and it helps me to maintain the required energy level in my body.
For all of above reasons, I would like to conclude that modernization in the food products has changed our lives by making it easier.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'in addition', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258358662614 0.229887763892 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.155015197568 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0881458966565 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048632218845 0.046263068375 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0547112462006 0.0685040099705 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118541033435 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0395136778116 0.0351676179071 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86364862341 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0303951367781 0.0309702414327 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103343465046 0.0887237588012 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00911854103343 0.0209618222197 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0121580547112 0.0139019557991 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1769.0 2387.08602151 74% => OK
No of words: 301.0 408.028673835 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87707641196 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31561461794 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242524916944 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172757475083 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0830564784053 0.112833075102 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86364862341 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 61.0116986101 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0833333333 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.2061226282 48.84282405 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.416666667 120.699889404 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.644075263715 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 49.3358250277 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.61176470588 1.45489161554 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17647010816 0.300154397459 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119996387601 0.103427244359 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0556333821969 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.657646248071 0.497263757937 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177763129705 0.151897553556 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797852121655 0.114077575197 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559322126428 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.30584208391 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0954355308442 0.067059652881 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12924662301 0.210909579961 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238100625881 0.0618886996521 38% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.