Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.
The foremost reason of unhealthy eating in today’s world is the hectic life that all of us are undergoing. With the advent of new technologies, the pace of life is escalating, leaving us with a meager amount of time for food preparation and consequently the only feasible option is consuming canned and prepared foods. It is an axiom that canned foods are deprived of any nutritious components that a human body demands for routine functioning, so by devouring these processed foods, a person cannot receive the specific amount of vitamins and other necessary elements and consequently his body suffers from malnutrition that is noxious for our physical condition. According to a survey published in Times magazine, during the last century, by improving the pace of life by twenty percent, unhealthy food consumption has augmented by thirty-five percent, and accordingly the diseases relating to undernourishment has increased by fifty-nine percent which divulges the interconnection between prepared foods consumption and human illnesses that is extremely hazardous to our health.
Another compelling reason is the proliferation of fast-food restaurants. As the statistics show, the financial profit of a fast-food establishment is much more than any other businesses that leads to an incessant increase in number of the stores that renders junk-foods. In these kind of businesses, there are two crucial factors which are preparing food in shorter time and selling them cheaper. Therefore, by considering these aspects, the only option is using inferior quality ingredient that has detrimental effect on our well-being. As the FDA statistics indicate, by enhancement in number of junk-food restaurants between 2000 and 2010 and the competition among them in order to absorb more customers, the quality of foods has reduces by eighty-five percent and simultaneously the heart0-attack rate has increased by four times which demonstrates the severity of our health condition attributable to increase in number of junk-food restaurants.
The last subtle point which requires meticulous attention is the unrestrained implementation of additives in foods. As a hasty scrutinize of history reveals, human have used condiments for thousands of years for a diversity of reasons such as their delicious and unique tastes in foods or their ability to heal some illnesses. But, like everything else, excessive use of these beneficial substances could have detrimental consequences on our health. Besides, to meet the increasing demand of foods in the world, synthesized flavors were invented that are produced merely by some chemical reactions and not in nature. According to the last information published by the FAO, there are some alarming and terrifying outcomes of using these chemical seasonings and based on the same results, some countries prohibited the implementation of these artificial additives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 418, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'demand'?
Suggestion: demand
...nutritious components that a human body demands for routine functioning, so by devourin...
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Line 1, column 1007, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foods'' or 'food's'?
Suggestion: foods'; food's
...es the interconnection between prepared foods consumption and human illnesses that is...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... the stores that renders junk-foods. In these kind of businesses, there are two crucial fa...
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Line 2, column 951, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ase in number of junk-food restaurants. The last subtle point which requires met...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'besides', 'but', 'consequently', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'in short', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275362318841 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.138716356108 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113871635611 0.0866891130778 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0269151138716 0.046263068375 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0269151138716 0.0685040099705 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146997929607 0.118717715034 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0621118012422 0.0351676179071 177% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.20894156593 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0186335403727 0.0309702414327 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105590062112 0.0887237588012 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00414078674948 0.0209618222197 20% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0207039337474 0.0139019557991 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2908.0 2387.08602151 122% => OK
No of words: 443.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.56433408578 5.86048508987 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.426636568849 0.338922669872 126% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.349887133183 0.251872472559 139% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.291196388262 0.174417080927 167% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.221218961625 0.112833075102 196% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.20894156593 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541760722348 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 63.578517968 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 31.6428571429 20.5533526081 154% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.734201456 48.84282405 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.714285714 120.699889404 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6428571429 20.5533526081 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.644075263715 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.5376344086 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 66.6315704611 45.7405998639 146% => OK
Elegance: 2.51612903226 1.45489161554 173% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261553555463 0.300154397459 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118224165071 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0690086709351 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.549744981401 0.497263757937 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144288923931 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13562950442 0.114077575197 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697130692909 0.0781384742642 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.511441288869 0.336927656856 152% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0351683233178 0.067059652881 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211508951168 0.210909579961 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316056181536 0.0618886996521 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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