Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer - items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.
When it comes the issue the selection between hand-made items or machine-made items, some people prefer to use commodities, which are produce by machine. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. The main reasons for this selection are that price and the warranty as well as standardized methods for manufactures them.
First and the most important reason is that wares are produced by machine are cheaper than that of by hand. In fact, industrial factories use of new technologies for produce, which allows them to have mass production, while the use of hand for create wares not only is time consuming but also increase the price of outcomes. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. In my country, Iran, Most people like to cover their houses floor with carpets. They usually prefer to use of machine-made carpets, because the price of handmade carpet is so high that a great percentage of people can not afford to buy it.
A further point we must consider is that machine-made products are standard and we can repair them easily. Indeed, the use computer, robots, and sensors allow companies to decrease the manufacture mistake and produce wares with high quality. Hence, their produces always are standard, which lets us to fix simply. I think that there is not a better instance than Rolls Royce Company, who produces car by hand. Imagine a person who purchased a car from this company, and now need some spare pieces. He hardly can find them in some special stores. So, it is quite normal that he prefer to buy a machine made cars, because he can repair them easily.
Apart from point I made above, because of the standardized methods use to manufacture machine-made items, producer can offer extended warranty to their products. Indeed, when factories could offer long warranty that they are sure that their entire products have the same quality, which is possible by using automatic production line. However, the scenario is different in hand-made items, because producer can not make many of them with the same quality.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that machine-made products are cheap, standard, and long warranty. Although, some people can do not like to use items, which is produced by machine, they never could ignore these huge of profits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
...ith high quality. Hence, their produces always are standard, which lets us to fix simply. ...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ve, because of the standardized methods use to manufacture machine-made items, prod...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'apart from', 'i think', 'in fact', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22271714922 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.149220489978 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0957683741648 0.0866891130778 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0690423162584 0.046263068375 149% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0601336302895 0.0685040099705 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120267260579 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0155902004454 0.0351676179071 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.53901154622 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0244988864143 0.0309702414327 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0779510022272 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0244988864143 0.0209618222197 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0200445434298 0.0139019557991 144% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2373.0 2387.08602151 99% => OK
No of words: 398.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96231155779 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344221105528 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266331658291 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188442211055 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0929648241206 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53901154622 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517587939698 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 57.3579956848 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9523809524 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4845086707 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 120.699889404 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 45.5855467815 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.288 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308614215679 0.300154397459 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101544513885 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0777619730561 0.0752933317313 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.466743965975 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144479988951 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104053390393 0.114077575197 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102611091807 0.0781384742642 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.29026135646 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0140885865113 0.067059652881 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21610784185 0.210909579961 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478086472953 0.0618886996521 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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