The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology for outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The discovery of nuclear substances has brought several advantages to society. It has provided reliability and environmental aspects of benefits, while it holds the risks and inflexibility. Due to the possible threats of nuclear should be dealt with more cautious than that of its benefits. Therefore, nuclear technology should be used with a caution.
Nuclear power has a great reliability in terms of providing a long lasting energy source. According to the science journal, the nuclear energy can be used for over 540 years without interruptions. Also, it does not affect by weather, so it can run at a cheaper cost, because it does not require any additional material in the case of any unexpected weather. In other words, the nuclear energy would not require any extra material to maintenance from rains and storms, so the installation and the usage of such substances are easier. Furthermore, while people are using such energy, it does not release any emissions, it does not contribute to any environmental damage. Nuclear energies have not contribute to acid rains or global warming. Therefore, nuclear energies are the cleanest and easiest forms of natural energies.
Despite all these benefits of nuclear power, it cannot deny that the nuclear is the one of the most dangerous weapons. There are huge probabilities of possibility of nuclear accidents. In any cases of either man-fault or by natural disaster, it can release the content to the environment and the consequences would be disasterous. For example, Fukushima, the massive phenomenon occurred due to the earthquake but the result of such incident is still affecting the environment. In addition to this, the way of wasting the left over nuclear energy can be the problem. Even though, nuclear power does not release any emissions, it has the leftover wastes. It does not mean that it does not have any wastes. Like all energy sources, it also has to take care of wastes. The wrong way to the waste can damage the environment or it can fall onto the hands of terrorists. Thus, the consequence is phenomenal.
In conclusion, the cheapest and easiest way of using the nuclear energy seems to be the most efficient energy sources. However, it cannot avoid its terrifying results. Hence, the nuclear energy should be used with a caution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ithout interruptions. Also, it does not affect by weather, so it can run at a cheaper cos...
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Line 2, column 696, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
...ental damage. Nuclear energies have not contribute to acid rains or global warming. Theref...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in any case', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23023255814 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.141860465116 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104651162791 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0511627906977 0.0501214627716 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0395348837209 0.0437548338989 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111627906977 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0325581395349 0.0403226058552 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85981204465 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0279069767442 0.0326793684256 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.118604651163 0.0861772015684 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0302325581395 0.021408717616 141% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2304.0 1933.35771543 119% => OK
No of words: 380.0 316.048096192 120% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06315789474 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378947368421 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.321052631579 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126315789474 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85981204465 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.037074148 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481578947368 0.56093040696 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.2038364738 60.7387585426 84% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0891783567 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8333333333 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7222826315 49.517814964 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 127.492653851 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.708333333333 0.814263465372 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 47.9385964912 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.61 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464556378377 0.332605444948 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121219410065 0.102741220458 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0944579007477 0.0668466124924 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.484950282384 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166268262126 0.148594505496 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192531187292 0.134430193775 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10841424566 0.0742795772207 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.467260934531 0.324371583561 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105201361455 0.0638462369009 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.357288819211 0.228012699653 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499979972135 0.058150111329 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.