The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Leadership means leading a group of people towards a certain common goal. Leadership is one of the traits that is very much in demand in every field. The argument suggests that the society should instill a sense of cooperation in the new generation rather than competition to develop leadership skills. I do not completely agree with the argument as to excel in today's world, competition is equally important.
Being Cooperative is one of the qualities of a leader.As the leader has to manage and lead a team, he should be taught to work with cooperation, working together with the team towards the end goal. Even in the cooperative sector, the team leader is the one that drives the whole team together, helping the team in need and taking the help of the team when even he is stuck. Cooperation in the team facilitates team work.
Though, Having a sense of cooperation is very important for leadership skills, one cannot neglect the competitive skills. Competition should act as a catalyst for the leader to grow in his skills. Healthy competition is a very important key for growth. It makes person to strive hard and prepare the best he can. Society should facilitate healthy competition among the young generation. They should teach the young the thin line between the good and bad competition and to never the cross the line.
Recently , Google launched "Allo" , a messenger application in competition to "whatsapp" , the most famous messenger application with today's generation. If Google CEO, or the Team leader of the "Allo" project did not have the competitive skills , then the product might not be as good as it claims. Competition thrives us to do better than the precedent.
To conclude, Both cooperative and competitive skills are required in today's world to excel and grow in the every field.
- College and university education should be free for all students fully financed by the government 65
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. 50
- We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own 16
- All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252124645892 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.1388101983 0.157235817809 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0793201133144 0.0880659088768 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0538243626062 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0254957507082 0.0444667217837 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107648725212 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0254957507082 0.0406280797675 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04961744391 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0311614730878 0.030933414821 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.127478753541 0.0997080785238 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0226628895184 0.0249443105267 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00849858356941 0.0148568991511 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1849.0 2732.02544248 68% => OK
No of words: 308.0 452.878318584 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00324675325 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.366883116883 0.366273622748 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253246753247 0.280924506359 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165584415584 0.200843997647 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13961038961 0.132149295362 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04961744391 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 219.290929204 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480519480519 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 47.6085235654 55.4138127331 86% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1176470588 23.380412469 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9624012166 59.4972553346 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.764705882 141.124799967 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 23.380412469 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.294117647059 0.674092028746 44% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 43.4423223835 51.4728631049 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.76623376623 1.64882698954 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354484155538 0.391690518653 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.161350831291 0.123202303941 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.127460532539 0.077325440228 165% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.594130286679 0.547984918172 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.195255857187 0.149214159877 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153238278485 0.161403998019 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493541754224 0.0892212321368 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.323979730414 0.385218514788 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10256779638 0.0692045440612 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227485129734 0.275328986314 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880044462768 0.0653680567796 135% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.