The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from.
The given line graph presents the number of visit to Australia by overseas residents per year while the given table gives information about travelers from given six different country in year 1975 to 2005.
As is pretenses in the given line graph, around 9 millions tourists came to Australia in 1975 and the number kept increasing steadily and reached 1.5 millions in 1985. In the year the number of travelers who visited Australia reached to 24 millions and finally number was increased continuously and reached 30 millions in 1995. the number increased each year starting from 1975 and in 30 years, and got well over 30 millions.
The table graph compare the foreign tourists who visited Australia in 1975 and 2005 and shows numbers of visitors. In 1975, 2.9 millions came from South Korea and 3.2 millions came from Japan which was the highest visitors form these two countries. Moreover, the remaining travelers came from China, USA, Britain and Europe.
After 30 years in 2005, the total Australia visiting travelers increased drastically and reached to 30.4 millions compared to 8.87 millions in 30 years back. 9 millions came from South Korea and 12 Millions came from Japan in 2005 and this number is more than 3 times compared to travelers number of 1975. The majority of the visitors come to visit Australia form Asia than the Europe and USA. In the 2005, around 22 millions from Asia and 8.5 millions from Britain, USA and Europe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.284090909091 0.268076937826 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.143939393939 0.116061578633 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.030303030303 0.0759168565197 40% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0265151515152 0.0366838410393 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.143939393939 0.155750635184 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0416666666667 0.0379272487307 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40668927564 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030303030303 0.0210936926555 144% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0757575757576 0.0948980150116 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0113636363636 0.00967000014798 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1447.0 1161.00487805 125% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.9 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90612244898 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73763899035 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322448979592 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269387755102 0.247514529752 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208163265306 0.171178102325 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10612244898 0.112407865282 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40668927564 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45306122449 0.546246751206 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.9140555235 49.3433353143 83% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5 23.0094962315 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0656082921 42.9750493124 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.7 135.714022679 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 23.0094962315 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.689975730869 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 51.4387755102 47.7609492067 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.75555555556 2.94281807926 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381233690522 0.418131533498 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.215228508669 0.181151798455 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0898735827124 0.0850326197045 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.702424729627 0.706616315825 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151655465091 0.157042692854 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233061738582 0.228904883108 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116557140548 0.108899403657 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.454996609766 0.367819155151 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104358946237 0.0812612215331 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321976392631 0.316326947829 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078911419708 0.0921553760075 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.