Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Universities have not only the responsibility to provide students professional education for the purpose of their future career, but also the duty to develop them into responsible citizens of a society. In both aspects, requiring every student to rake a variety of courses outside student’s field of study would be beneficial.
Human society divided knowledge into different discipline and fields. Universities are a manifestation of this methodology as they divided students into different majors. Recently, however, people have been combining knowledge from different disciplines to better assist them in achieving new scientific discoveries and making policies. For example, people are now using computer algorithms to design potential medicine in a more efficient way. Also, game theories helps policy makers to find better solutions in regulating companies in matters of certain action that causes externality. The combination of knowledge and methodologies from different discipline and fields helps solve many problems that may be challenging otherwise.
In the aspect of making well-informed decision and being a better citizen in the society, knowledge from different fields is also beneficial. Biology helps people understand the potential harm of food products from contaminated environment. Economy helps people understand who the lowest wage would affect workers. And law prepares people for the circumstances where a lawsuit is required. And sociology helps people understand the mechanism behind social events and advise them in their political stand. In addition to it, if we image a society with people who have only knowledge of their own profession, it would be extremely difficult to understand each other and collaborate.
In addition, requiring students taking courses in other fields may help them better understand their real passion for career. Many students in college choose their major based on an imagination rather than a realistic understanding of their own future professional. In this sense, requiring courses in many different disciplines at the first two years of the programs would be beneficial in providing with them the real-life experience which would help them to choose them fields of study wisely.
In conclusion, I would agree that the advantages of requiring students to take courses outside them own fields would be tremendous. Even though taking additional courses outside of one’s own field may take up certain amount of time which could be spent one’s own field of study, the advantages would outweigh the disadvantages it may bring, for both the individual students and the society as a whole.
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure 88
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...al. In this sense, requiring courses in many different disciplines at the first two years of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2269.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61633663366 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01765363445 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514851485149 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6016230541 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.421052632 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220532491995 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715139206945 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896165911588 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152247076842 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107082591016 0.0667264976115 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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