All Mc Donald outlets and other fast food restaurants must be closed down for they sell stomach aggressive food
Agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that current people “who live in developed and developing countries” tend to eat junk food while going along in order to abridge eating hours as much as possible despite having knowledge about its dangerous aspects for healthy life. To be more specific, one of the most well-known brands of fast food is deemed Mc Donald with its some variety of burgers, not to mention restaurants which serve not only local or traditional meal but also fast food. Personally, I support the idea which is for being banned junk food cafés and restaurants because I believe the disadvantages of fast food outstrip its advantages.
First of all, one of the most essential reasons why people consume this type of food is that it is easily prepared in a couple of minutes so that people stand a chance not to waste their urgent time on the go, additionally, it costs cheaply. However, people do not realize the digestion system issue because eating fast food affects one’s stomach harmfully.
Moreover, it is extremely challenging to follow a healthy diet when people eat regularly at fast food restaurants because of using the cheapest ingredients. For instance, cheese can be a good source of protein and calcium but made from non-dairy ingredients and the same goes for meat, chicken, and eggs. At the same time, it tends to be low in nutrients and almost totally lacking in fruits, vegetables, and fiber.
In conclusion, Mc Donald’s fast food cafes and other related restaurants must be shut down due to impact on healthy diet by providing junk food which is made cheap, unnatural ingredients up as well as not having gotten along with fruits and vegetables.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97879858657 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76179550116 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2390986955 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.555555556 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4444444444 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4444444444 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270338418839 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11094145259 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718028271911 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161648387233 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619580075552 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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