Write a letter to the hotel manager about a bad experience you had while staying there. Include the following in your letter:
– Where and when did you stay?
– What had happened?
– Suggest a solution for the situation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in order to express my dissatisfaction concerning a terrible experience which I had in your hotel quite recently.
Last week my family and I came to your grand hotel on our summer breaks as usual. Upon arrival, however, I was informed that my favorite room that I had booked prior to coming was ran out of service, so it was changed, consequently. To make matter worse, after several hours waiting, another room which was recommended by your shift manager was not specious enough for us. After accommodating, I also noticed that the air condition would not run properly. This caused considerable inconvenience, not only to myself but also to my immediate family.
I was, therefore, wondering how it could be possible for such an expensive as well as five-star hotel such problems! As this foul-up occurred and was completely your service problems, I feel that I am entitled to request a full refund.
I can be contacted at the mobile phone number provided.
A swift response is greatly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my dissatisfaction concerning a terrible experience which I had in your hotel qui...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'run'.
Suggestion: run
...m that I had booked prior to coming was ran out of service, so it was changed, cons...
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Line 14, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ated. Yours faithfully, John Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02222222222 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95409320548 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711111111111 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5244487585 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105364205023 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036850985402 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04005716471 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515665149923 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556594721935 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.