some people think that child's success in adult life depends on the way their parents brought them up . do you agree or disagree.
It is debated how much the upbringing of children has a role in their later adult life success. In my opinion, the way parents rear their sons and daughters highly influences their characters, which is the main reason for success, however, there are other important factors that are essential to have a successful adult life.
Beyond a shadow of a doubt, how parents raise their children affects how successful they may be when they grow up. Fathers and mothers teach their offspring moral principles and good manners. Ethical behavior is one of the vital features of a successful life. Another essential aspect, when parents discover their children's talents in a young age and encourage them to develop and enhance them, they are likely to make of them more successful individuals.
On the other hand, there are several other measures that adults should take in their life to be more successful; firstly, educational degrees are one of the reasons for succeeding. For example, people who attain university education get better jobs. Secondly, being successful is directly proportional to how much an individual applies himself and work hard to achieve his dream. Finally, adult success is highly dependent on the way they manage their time. Successful people are known to have an organized time schedule.
To conclude, in my opinion, I believe that a successful adult life does not only depend on how he is raised, but also to be successful an adult should be well educated, highly dedicated to his work, and have time management skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07843137255 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6508295583 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.916666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288368230644 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11393458055 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061774676757 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185938550978 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394273141878 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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