"Any decision whether made by government,or by a corporation, or by an individual person-must take into account future conditions more than present conditions".
As in the given statement ,"Any decision whether made by government,or by a corporation, or by an individual person-must take into account future conditions more than present conditions" is certainly a complex and controversial statement.So,i partially agree and disagree with this statement.I provide my reasons,examples and evidence in support of my point of view in the following paragraphs.
In any democratic country,"Government" refers to a group elected representatives from different parties who are validly elected by the people of that country.The party which has an majority of the elected representatives can able to form the "Government".And they govern according to predefined rules and regulations in the constitution of that country.Government is responsible to work according to the welfare of the people.And according to division of country into states,then government in the state is named as "State Government" and for central or which governs all the State governments is named as "Central Government".
In consolidation of my point of view:
Why i agree with this statement?
Any decision made by the government ,or by a corporation,or by an individual person must consider the future conditions more than present because the result of that decision may lead to attain certain goals which are required now.But, this may tends to damage or make the situations more complex and worsen for the future.So, the decision made by government must consider future conditions more than that of present day conditions.
For example,consider the scenario in second world war, in which major destruction happened in Japan.Japanese government decided to involve in war,without considering the future happenings.In which US military forces dropped atomic bombs in cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki in Japan.It made huge damage to Japan then and even now the younger generations are facing health problems like born child is def or with poor eye-sight.This clearly explains that huge penalty for the future generations because of the decision made by the government without in concern about the future.
Why i disagree with this statement?
Any decision made by the government ,or by a corporation,or by an individual person must consider the future conditions more than present because focusing more in future than present may leads to face more damage and people have to suffer a lot and this causes severe opposition to the government from the people. So, the decision made by the government should equally consider the present day scenario's and future conditions equally.
For example,consider a situation where due to huge natural calamity which leads to vigorous and unstoppable rainfall in a particular location.Due to this the water stored in the dams had crossed increased and beyond the limit and results in breaking of the dam.Now government has to take a decision for the welfare of people by considering the present scenario gates of the dam has to be opened to let the water go out.Rather than considering for water scarcity to future generations,if the gates of dams are kept close means results to damage and breakage of dam.Which cause major loss to both present and future.
CONCLUSION:
As i have provided irrefutable evidence in support of my point of view,i conclude my argument reiterating that statement "any decision whether made by government,or by a corporation, or by an individual person-must take into account future conditions more than present conditions" is partially acceptable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, then, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 97.0 58.6224719101 165% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 12.9106741573 256% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3057.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 550.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55818181818 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63652772357 2.79657885939 130% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429090909091 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 974.7 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.77640449438 619% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 55.0 23.0359550562 239% => Sentence length is too long
Sentence length SD: 214.965694938 60.3974514979 356% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 305.7 118.986275619 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.0 23.4991977007 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.97078651685 201% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 39.0 7.80617977528 500% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500054976214 0.243740707755 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247656777543 0.0831039109588 298% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226437839206 0.0758088955206 299% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229233109822 0.150359130593 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.240521162527 0.0667264976115 360% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.3 14.1392134831 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.27 48.8420337079 -3% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 12.1743820225 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.1639044944 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 11.8971910112 282% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 11.2143820225 214% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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